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I Got Mine Designed (Free verse) by Skamper

snap frozen delicacies scrummy yummy nuked to perfection intelligent injections minor defections dented fenders force fed bred open legs future dreamings eyes closed impregnating hose blows bright lights and shiny things glitter and glowing growing fresh is life’s zest de-frost second best it just never tastes quite the same Funny that...

Skamper 6-Jul-08/4:23 AM
no, not attacking the frost at all...just puting some emphasis on the process of defrosting, and no matter what the item is it's never the same as the original. It always loses something, and I wonder what we lose when tinkering with life.




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