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who wansa do that? (Free verse) by malpaso
i do

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Arithmetic Mean: 10.0
Weighted score: 5.237129
Overall Rank: 4176
Posted: December 21, 2007 2:28 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2007 2:28 PM PST
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[n/a] Skamper @ 58.171.135.99 | 28-Dec-07/11:44 PM | Reply
As much as I enjoy the short poem, due to lack of true inteligence...I can't seem to get a handle on this one. There's no oomph or moment of clarity, or nod, or small smile, or any of the things that brings instant understanding of what your saying, that should come with shorter writes.

"You wanna go do somethin'?"

sighs

"Nah"

- boredom, apathy...a statement, but is it poetry? hmmm?
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