Poemranker [Poem: who wansa do that?] [by malpaso] Sat Nov 23 16:23:20 PST 2024

who wansa do that? (Free verse) by malpaso

i do

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Up the ladder: untitled

Down the ladder: seven one four before

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Arithmetic Mean: 10.0
Weighted score: 5.237129
Overall Rank: 4162

Posted: December 21, 2007 2:28 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2007 2:28 PM PST
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Comments:

[n/a] Skamper @ 58.171.135.99 | 28-Dec-07/11:44 PM | Reply

As much as I enjoy the short poem, due to lack of true inteligence...I can't seem to get a handle on this one. There's no oomph or moment of clarity, or nod, or small smile, or any of the things that brings instant understanding of what your saying, that should come with shorter writes.

"You wanna go do somethin'?"

sighs

"Nah"

- boredom, apathy...a statement, but is it poetry? hmmm?

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