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untitled (Free verse) by Spacey
the ice cracked, and creaked, creaking open. exposing black, blacked out, leaked leaking spirit sparkle tokens. if you nail it shut - - spirits touch touched will spiral it open the ice is just gone, soon melts once broken. your with the open sea. the harbour is clear. there is only me.

Up the ladder: Cormac Plays
Down the ladder: who wansa do that?

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Arithmetic Mean: 10.0
Weighted score: 5.237129
Overall Rank: 4171
Posted: September 6, 2009 11:08 AM PDT; Last modified: September 6, 2009 11:08 AM PDT
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