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who wansa do that? (Free verse) by malpaso

i do

Skamper 28-Dec-07/11:44 PM
As much as I enjoy the short poem, due to lack of true inteligence...I can't seem to get a handle on this one. There's no oomph or moment of clarity, or nod, or small smile, or any of the things that brings instant understanding of what your saying, that should come with shorter writes.

"You wanna go do somethin'?"

sighs

"Nah"

- boredom, apathy...a statement, but is it poetry? hmmm?




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