poemranker ::20 most recent comments by royalflesh (41-60)

Comments byroyalflesh, 41–60 back. Include replies

on crispy by skaskowski 16 Sep 2002, 11:48 AM
i'd like to see more effort. Cringe-daggers in my back and make them come back for more. 5
on some deleted poem 17 Sep 2002, 2:41 PM
sometimes I laugh in the mirror of disgust and find humor deep within the tarnished dirty sink (wink)...so i think. D.A. you done well.
on some deleted poem 17 Sep 2002, 2:42 PM
sorry dude...that first line killed me and stabbed my chest...no more..no more ! oh, please hold me back. 2
on NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 17 Sep 2002, 2:53 PM
truely an ill-kissed reality. My chest pounds through your pure talent to write and aches with desire - to have half your ability and elevated reality of truth. 9
on A.M. by renwick 16 Sep 2002, 11:46 AM
ok. there's much to be considered adhearing to such a disaster of language. You sir, wear a cloak and spin nervously through the day to find the other twin that beckens your lousy name. Ciao, good day. 3
on Faucet's got a nasty drip. FUCK! Not again! by <{Baba^Yaga}> 15 Sep 2002, 11:23 PM
Baba^Yaga - seems like you've got some itchity switch that needs a cleansing. Try holy water - (its in the back of the sanctuary, next to the pope's glory hole) If you talk to the dispenser of your ill-fated and tainted drip on a regular basis tell her. Otherwise fuck her (just not like the other leathered and feathered trickity whore night).
on A Man Of The World by vulcan 14 Sep 2002, 1:12 AM
I lick kitty. Then throw it around the corner to check back again, tomorrow.
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus 14 Sep 2002, 1:17 AM
tantilizing. metamorphic beauty. Read it over just to see fuzzy again. Definitely top quality and makes me fondle the quality of my other night (project) task of looking out for my counter (part). 9
on deluge by kawakurdi 12 Sep 2002, 8:57 PM
captivating ramshed of interesting and thoughtfull words. Impressed without disbelief. Knew you would pull through. In the wrench of the day the night doth fall hard and fast...so they say. 8/10
on fairy tale by jlanza 12 Sep 2002, 8:59 PM
touch me! Your getting hot! and making me sweat. ever read the magician's heart. its hard to find.
on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass 12 Sep 2002, 9:00 PM
right...you wanted to touch them to see if those muscles were real of not. Interesting tid-bit of "Real-Life" ... but seriously...is this something worth writing about?? Like it, but would rather read Dr. Seuss.
on Kept Safe by trev086 12 Sep 2002, 9:02 PM
ok trev. I really like the first stanza...might be interesting to play around with more word choice.
on Love is just a word by trev086 12 Sep 2002, 9:03 PM
Know exactly how you feel. Like this one much better. Good job. Great work! 8
on america's promise by dylansong 12 Sep 2002, 9:03 PM
only made it half-way through....let's get dinner and talk.
on Life's Great Irony by Tascobar 12 Sep 2002, 7:11 PM
maybe being unable to hear let him understand the unspoken ( or rather , respoken ) gestures more carefully. Thus, being even more aware of what was going on behind his back (in front of his face). Hmmm...just maybe.
on To Kiss by Jody Conn 12 Sep 2002, 7:13 PM
where's the "dark and depressing" part. I have seemed to have missed it. All is well. Behave! Behave!
on some deleted poem 12 Sep 2002, 7:14 PM
Did i meet you last night?
on while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit 11 Sep 2002, 9:25 PM
P&K - hey there. New here. Give me a hand. How do I respond to people's comments on my poems?? Would love to converse. Civilized. Royalfleshly.
on Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal 11 Sep 2002, 9:41 PM
essence of relationships. Well put. Well deserved 8/10
on Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi 11 Sep 2002, 9:05 PM
great! very impressed! You're going somewhere - and this is part of the traveling. Fantastic-iclicly-make-me-cum good. 9/10