Re: Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn	11-Sep-02/7:31 PM
there are some matters that need clarity in this piece. Try to break it up to make the read more lively.
Re: Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	11-Sep-02/8:11 PM
tantilizing tid-bit. Horror-ishly visibly embeded in my mind. Horror and sex. Wet and sweat. Trick or treat. Gread.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-02/8:12 PM
who would have thought....Dave is all the way gay. Funny isn't it where he pops up in civilization. Crazy cats...deadly dogs...do no harm. Like it, fiercly!
Re: the story of an arrogant butterfly by kawakurdi	11-Sep-02/8:18 PM
Kawa - I want to hear your voice in your writing. Who are you? Kawa -turdy. Nice, but give me more. More tricks, licks, micks, kicks, sick..soon..bick shick. Razor burn.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-02/8:25 PM
I see. Babies making babies? Or rather, babies being babies? Its wonderous how the world turns...like sand through an hour glass...so are the days of our lives. 7/10
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-02/8:27 PM
I was inspired. At your mother's house...while in labor. More please. more.
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	11-Sep-02/8:31 PM
You idiots.. don't you understand anything. Its life. Live. Enjoy. Die. anyways..followers or failure. DarkA. I found it invoking, cautiously simulated within the wind of today's time and hour's friend. Cherrio.
Re: A missing puzzle piece. by trev086	11-Sep-02/8:57 PM
is this some kind of school assignment? Please, try not to be so predictable. I respect your writing, but capture something else...with all due respect. 5/10
Re: Reflected, Dreamed by Frass	11-Sep-02/9:01 PM
good turns, transitions, juxations. Upside down i read and see a meaning that is very, incredibly gleaming. Love it. Love it. 8/10
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Sep-02/9:03 PM
I'm so touched. I know you want, or have wanted, or I, or you, wanted to...wait...whats the next line??