on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 9:03 PM
I'm so touched. I know you want, or have wanted, or I, or you, wanted to...wait...whats the next line??
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 8:12 PM
who would have thought....Dave is all the way gay. Funny isn't it where he pops up in civilization. Crazy cats...deadly dogs...do no harm. Like it, fiercly!
on Not in front of the kids. by darby pyn
11 Sep 2002, 7:31 PM
there are some matters that need clarity in this piece. Try to break it up to make the read more lively.
on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>
11 Sep 2002, 8:11 PM
tantilizing tid-bit. Horror-ishly visibly embeded in my mind. Horror and sex. Wet and sweat. Trick or treat. Gread.
on the story of an arrogant butterfly by kawakurdi
11 Sep 2002, 8:18 PM
Kawa - I want to hear your voice in your writing. Who are you? Kawa -turdy. Nice, but give me more. More tricks, licks, micks, kicks, sick..soon..bick shick. Razor burn.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 8:25 PM
I see. Babies making babies? Or rather, babies being babies? Its wonderous how the world turns...like sand through an hour glass...so are the days of our lives. 7/10
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 8:27 PM
I was inspired. At your mother's house...while in labor. More please. more.
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Sep 2002, 8:31 PM
You idiots.. don't you understand anything. Its life. Live. Enjoy. Die. anyways..followers or failure. DarkA. I found it invoking, cautiously simulated within the wind of today's time and hour's friend. Cherrio.
on A missing puzzle piece. by trev086
11 Sep 2002, 8:57 PM
is this some kind of school assignment? Please, try not to be so predictable. I respect your writing, but capture something else...with all due respect. 5/10
on Reflected, Dreamed by Frass
11 Sep 2002, 9:01 PM
good turns, transitions, juxations. Upside down i read and see a meaning that is very, incredibly gleaming. Love it. Love it. 8/10