on Hunger 2 by Dovina
20 May 2006, 4:51 PM
fabulously unfunny.
on THE BLOBBY QUIZ?? by MR Blobby
20 May 2006, 4:50 PM
wot iz this deer? U Kannut spel 2 gud
on Thoughts Controlled by a Slow Server by <Wankster>
20 May 2006, 4:49 PM
You are well-named.
on The Christ Omelette by horus8
20 May 2006, 4:48 PM
Puerile drivel.
on Little Bird by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:47 PM
"Obsurd" is totally hilarious! 0/10
on The Cookies by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:46 PM
The cookies were not baked
They were given to you cold
With the booger taste, it, you could not rank
All you wanted was it to be baked by a trippy skank.
What is a trippy skank, dearie?
They were given to you cold
With the booger taste, it, you could not rank
All you wanted was it to be baked by a trippy skank.
What is a trippy skank, dearie?
on "Good Bye" by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:46 PM
Better than the last two, but not much. Very whiney.
on Pawn by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:45 PM
Truly dreadful. And your spelling isn't much good either.
on The Blood by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:44 PM
Appalling.
on A Different Point of View by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:44 PM
The bit about the nail in the foot is very funny and deserves 10/10; but the rest is pretty dire.
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8
20 May 2006, 4:43 PM
This is quite funny. I would have given it 9/10 if it had not been for the dreadful punctuation and grammar. What a pity humour is wrecked by educational ignorance. Thus: 3/10 instead, but try harder.
on Love Is In The Air by Blindpoetry
20 May 2006, 4:40 PM
You could do with a few apostrophes in the right places.
on The Waves by Rilke4ClosetLesbians
20 May 2006, 4:39 PM
How true. How true.
on The Prodigal Daughter by Dovina
19 May 2006, 4:52 AM
Groveling? Groveling? You mean, to rhyme with "revealing" and "ceiling" ?
on Generation Next, Fuck you(The Fake Out) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
19 May 2006, 4:49 AM
OK I suppose.
on Tree of Life by ALChemy
17 May 2006, 7:37 AM
Odd. Are you saying the leaves fly to warm nests? That's a bit esoteric.
replying on Peeping Through The Window by Edna Sweetlove
16 May 2006, 4:47 PM
Bollocks to you. This is genius. If you don't think so you are dim.
replying on George and Samson by Edna Sweetlove
16 May 2006, 12:39 PM
What have bob jum and jim bob (who- or whatever they may be) got to do with my beautiful poem?
on Supposition Now by MacFrantic
16 May 2006, 12:37 PM
Pretentious I feel. Tryst is mis-spelled too.
on Always by freakything
16 May 2006, 12:36 PM
Quite nicely worded but more like prose broken up into arbitrary lines. Over-punctuated, I feel, with an excess of commas.