on Horus8 Vs. Book Learning by TanHand
13 Aug 2006, 5:58 PM
Illiterate boring shit.
on The Flame by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:58 PM
And you deserve to die after penning this tripe.
on You by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:57 PM
A comma too far.
on Feelings by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:56 PM
Goodbye is the happiest word.
on Sleepless Nights by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:56 PM
Crap.
on The Perfect Night by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:56 PM
How old are you? 10?
on Unwanted by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:55 PM
Badly punctuated crap.
on My Last Thought by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:54 PM
Badly punctuated garbage. Why not get educated?
on My Wish by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:54 PM
Not very good.
on Dustin by Fire_is_cool
13 Aug 2006, 5:53 PM
Illiterate garbage. Why not get educated?
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
13 Aug 2006, 3:30 AM
You are talented, dear. But this goes on too long. I have written a similar poem based upon diarhheoa in church. Here is the link for you:
http://www.allpoetry.com/poem/1189094
http://www.allpoetry.com/poem/1189094
on Dale Winton's Buttocks by Ya Kid K
13 Aug 2006, 3:24 AM
The first seven lines are OK. The last line is trash. Here is my revised and improved 2nd stanza for you.
Some say they are too soft.
Some say they're rather rugged.
Some say they're strangely clammy.
Especially after being buggered.
PS Who is Dale Winton?
Some say they are too soft.
Some say they're rather rugged.
Some say they're strangely clammy.
Especially after being buggered.
PS Who is Dale Winton?
on The Winturd Tale of Sir Donald Nudesby by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Aug 2006, 12:15 PM
I don't know the source of this one. And i don't like the exclamation mark at the end. It's unnecessary.
on Good King Brownceslas by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Aug 2006, 12:14 PM
I liked this one. Some of your stuff is very clever. Some is not. Like the curate's egg.
on I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Aug 2006, 12:12 PM
Why do you have the = signs and the _ sign in your name? And what is the "PI" for?
on I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Aug 2006, 12:11 PM
This is very good indeed. Eric would be very proud of you were he sufficiently with us.
Bucharest is not as exciting as Newcastle of course.
Bucharest is not as exciting as Newcastle of course.
on Reminder of Failure by Miggy
11 Aug 2006, 12:08 PM
A bit Lenny Cohen-ny!
on The Girl With the Tye-Dyed Hair by wilco
11 Aug 2006, 12:06 PM
Interesting narrative but a cop-out ending.
on Love Squirts by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
10 Aug 2006, 11:50 AM
You bumboy friends will have a rough passage.
on Guilt Trip by thepinkbunnyofdoom
10 Aug 2006, 11:48 AM
Crap.