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The Perfect Night (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool
We sit together, In the moonlight, Underneath the, Twinkling stars, You hold me close, In your arms, Never wanting, To let go, The rain begins, To fall, Yet we sit, Never to be moved, Together, Forever.

Up the ladder: Rushed into the blur
Down the ladder: On and On and On

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10719
Posted: October 19, 2004 9:22 AM PDT; Last modified: October 19, 2004 9:22 AM PDT
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[1] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.178.70.5 | 13-Aug-06/5:56 PM | Reply
How old are you? 10?
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