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My Last Thought (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool
I think of you, As the silver bullet, Jolts quickly through, My head, You realize, That you never listened, And you never cared, I tried to tell you, How I felt, But you never heard, It's too late now, You can't go back, And un-do what has, Already been done, You know, You should have listened, But now I am gone, And nothing, Can be done.

Up the ladder: Searching
Down the ladder: Fairy Orc

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11916
Posted: October 27, 2004 8:47 AM PDT; Last modified: October 27, 2004 8:47 AM PDT
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[7] oneglove @ 205.133.194.234 | 30-Oct-04/11:33 PM | Reply
the punctiation is kind of annoying and breaks the poem up in a weird way
[1] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.178.70.5 | 13-Aug-06/5:54 PM | Reply
Badly punctuated garbage. Why not get educated?
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