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Dale Winton's Buttocks (Free verse) by Ya Kid K Some say they are too rough.
Some say they are too pink.
Some say they are too hairy.
Some say they really stink.
Some say they are too soft.
Some say they're too oft splayed.
Some say they're strangely clammy.
Let's beat them with a spade!
Up the ladder:
for ya haters
Down the ladder:
Tasha:dedicated to my dear friend
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Posted: October 30, 2003 10:16 AM PST; Last modified: October 30, 2003 10:16 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.3468566 Overall Rank: 13061 Comments:
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30-Oct-03/10:18 AM
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someone should beat you with a spade. I'd sell tickets.
My idea of a late night toss. 10!
great start!!! but then you made an arse of it??
It was so cute in those days when you were just poor little Ranger â the little brit popper that couldnât.
The first seven lines are OK. The last line is trash. Here is my revised and improved 2nd stanza for you.
Some say they are too soft. Some say they're rather rugged. Some say they're strangely clammy. Especially after being buggered. PS Who is Dale Winton? 193 view(s)
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