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Tasha:dedicated to my dear friend (Free verse) by SweetJuliet10
I know your gone from this world, but you have left somethings behind. I know if you were here right now, your would tell us your okay and your fine. It seems like its been forever, but somehow our years flew by so fast. Now that you are no longer here, forever is sure to last. I will always have ther memories of our never ending love, the friendship I never forgot and will cherish all my life. I still dont really believe your gone, to all of us its like a bad dream. I wish I could rewind time, and tell you how much to me you mean. You were the best friend a girl could ever have, and as furious as I am at God... I thank him for the time we had. We did alot of crazy things with all our crazy friends, but i wouldnt take back a single one no matter how bad they seemed. For a long time me and Tash' were insepreable... you couldnt pry us apart, now forever she will live in a special place she always held inside my heart. So Ill always have the memories... some that only we shared, some Ill never tell... just keep them for myself. I loved you Tash' like a sis and that you always knew, one day we will meet again best friends me and you.

Up the ladder: Dale Winton's Buttocks
Down the ladder: All teeth when not.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5714285
Weighted score: 4.3468566
Overall Rank: 13068
Posted: May 14, 2004 12:02 AM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2004 12:02 AM PDT
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[0] edpeterson @ 68.79.27.79 | 14-May-04/5:50 AM | Reply
furious with god...always have memories....

really special. best poem i have read in a long time. -0-
[4] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 14-May-04/11:48 AM | Reply
How touching. It makes me want to cry tears of suffocation at the rhyme heart/apart. Then I'll die.

one day we will meet again best friends me and you would be better off with two commas as you can see lack of punctuation makes one sound either like a non-anglophone frenchman reading the King James Bible or like a a somnambulant George Bush.

Here's a -4- to take the pain away
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