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for ya haters (Lyric) by bxjay170
listen bricks i but lyrical bars to death/i got these words choked up begging for breath/am a real thug trust me you dont wonna get me stressed/reading my words brick, guess what you just been blessed/i bring pain to your chest/when i say am the best/jay thats the name/i aint on trl and i already in the streets got fame/for dissing like that ya should be ashamed/your failier aint a reason to put me the blame/ya cats is lame/i spit nothin but realnest brick trust me you need it in your brain/ill leave your hood nice and stained/ya about to derail like a amtrak train/am dropping truth to ya critics like rain/look at my words to see where there truly aimed/

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5714285
Weighted score: 4.3468566
Overall Rank: 13065
Posted: November 11, 2002 7:37 PM PST; Last modified: November 11, 2002 7:37 PM PST
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[n/a] brazen @ 12.90.40.120 | 12-Nov-02/4:50 AM | Reply
uh, word...yo. ya feelin' me ::wha?:: ya feelin' me ::wha?:: ya feelin' me ::wha?:: hmm hmm yeah.
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