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Friends come and go, but sisters lasts forever. (Free verse) by devina
Blood is thicker than water, I came to realize. Because my sisters is the most imortant thing in life. Even when we are very far apart, they will always be a big part of my heart. We can argue, scream and fight. But when it all comes down to it, they are my light in life. We are there for each other through thick and thin. We drink, laugh, cry and sing. I can´t explain all of this, but this is how it really is: Friends come and go, but sisters lasts forever!

Down the ladder: All teeth when not.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5714285
Weighted score: 4.3468566
Overall Rank: 13063
Posted: February 2, 2004 9:30 AM PST; Last modified: February 2, 2004 9:30 AM PST
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[n/a] richa @ 81.178.218.98 | 2-Feb-04/10:22 AM | Reply
'I can´t explain all of this' no but you could at least try to!
[1] andrewjthomas @ 192.150.10.200 | 2-Feb-04/1:10 PM | Reply
you need to read up on verb/subject agreement
and your sisters aren't things in your life
they are people in your life
[1] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 3-Feb-04/10:49 PM | Reply
Christ, that looked like a diet seven up getting canned than bottom raped by gerbal wearing a shirt saying "the wheel master". Didn't they tell you? you're not a loud on the bus.
[2] NanceXToo @ 24.229.216.168 | 5-Feb-04/1:16 PM | Reply
As a sentiment, it's...nice. As a poem, it's horrid. (Sorry). Definitely too cliche, not exactly well-written, and positively boring.
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