| Re: a comment on "How Often, Under Starry Skies" by anastomosis |
10-Jun-03/4:52 PM |
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I thought it was about someone's last night on Earth before they died of leukaemia... I'm sorry if I was wrong. I guess it just goes to show that different poemes can mean different things to different people. It's all about opinions, really. Catch you later.
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| Re: "How Often, Under Starry Skies" by anastomosis |
10-Jun-03/4:04 PM |
A subtle yet resonant piece. The colourful imagery and bewildering rhyme scheme are reminiscent of some of the later works of Tennyson, and even Chives. The rather pallid references to leukaemia, though somewhat out of place in a poeme about suicide, add a touch of humility that I feel is so badly lacking from contemporary western literature. This reviewer looks forward to anastomosis's next, even riper, comment deletion.
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| Re: B-Movie Video Voiceover Guy by spank me baby yeah |
10-Jun-03/11:08 AM |
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'Get it ready, will you?' was the answer, uttered so savagely that I started. The tone in which the words were said revealed a genuine bad nature. I no longer felt inclined to call Heathcliff a capital fellow.
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| Re: one man opponent by chinstrap |
10-Jun-03/9:46 AM |
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If they didn't contain completely different words, I'd say this was plagiarised from my epic piece "Enabled". -10-!!!
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| Re: a comment on A Vietnam Homecoming by scitz |
10-Jun-03/9:43 AM |
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Yes -- "guys in jersies playing elementary school recess games". Such a poignant observation... I... I don't normally cry, but *choke*... well, I guess it just...
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| Re: a comment on i blame me by nolan |
10-Jun-03/5:31 AM |
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| Re: a comment on A Shining Light by mikehi |
9-Jun-03/7:59 PM |
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Your teenage insights are incredibly valuable! Perhaps next you can point out that racism is wrong!
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| Re: a comment on A Shining Light by mikehi |
9-Jun-03/7:58 PM |
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We don't really care if everywhere we go people stop and stare at our friend dino.
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| Re: a comment on A Shining Light by mikehi |
9-Jun-03/7:21 PM |
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| Re: A Shining Light by mikehi |
9-Jun-03/7:21 PM |
DENVER
THE LAST DINOSAUR
HE'S MY FRIEND AND A WHOLE LOT MORE
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| Re: a comment on Beam reach by INTRANSIT |
9-Jun-03/6:42 PM |
There once was a lady from Ealing
who almost et her ceiling.
She licked her ceiling
with floppy lips,
and then said "Oh no, I've et my ceiling!"
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| Re: a comment on Beam reach by INTRANSIT |
9-Jun-03/5:28 PM |
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actually, *squelch* is the sound the boom makes when it slams into your horrid face.
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| Re: Beam reach by INTRANSIT |
9-Jun-03/9:39 AM |
An Unfortunate Gybing Incident (Horror) by -=Dark_Angel=-
Ready about! Lee ho!
*squelch*
O Jesu, what have I done....
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| Re: a comment on Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
8-Jun-03/5:16 AM |
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Not only is God alive, but God is a chive. Why else would the Angel Gay-briel have ascended up to heaven on a small bicycle made out of cream cheese?
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| Re: Blinded by lunar |
8-Jun-03/5:10 AM |
Premature Nappy Removal (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=-
As it pours out onto the sheets
Globules splatter my face and skin
I'm drenched in a monstrous shower of my own feculence
O Jesu, what have I done...
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| Re: a comment on Pain by joydoll |
8-Jun-03/4:52 AM |
What about:
yeast trolley, Margaret Twatcher, the crazy world of Arthur Brown, onion filter, axe wound, insideout pumpkin gadget, scoffing tuna, The Sixteenth Goat Disaster of 1869, Christ's Folly, Aladdin's Cave of Fish, Henrietta's Handy Cap, The Bernard Experiment, Kentucky Fried Knicker Bacon, cock socket, "pass the malt", Cyclical Ketchup Monstrosity, The Black Hole of Reason and Automatic IQ Lowerer?
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| Re: sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub |
7-Jun-03/7:16 PM |
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This poeme contains the word 'shark' which is contained in the username 'darkshark' which contains the word 'dark' which is also in the username '-=Dark_Angel=-'. A little suspicious, don't you think?
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| Re: a comment on Triolet, for Jason by beakism |
7-Jun-03/7:09 PM |
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Do you think it is impossible to derive from your belief-set two statements of the form P and not-P?
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| Re: a comment on Pain by joydoll |
7-Jun-03/2:22 PM |
I didn't "assume" anything. You just assumed I did. And when you ASSUME you make an ASS out of U and ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Also, you have just invented that etymology of 'cunt'. And even if it was true, your argument that it's naughty because men are afraid of powerful women (or whatever your argument is) is plainly silly. There are dozens of naughty synonyms for 'vagina', and none of them have anything to do with being 'powerful'.
Perhaps it is time to get over your obsession with genders. I say that in parting because I don't expect you to actually reply to any of my actual points, so I thought I might as well give you a starting point for your unconnected rant.
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| Re: a comment on Pain by joydoll |
7-Jun-03/5:26 AM |
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So yes, but only if you use a naughty word for it?
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