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Pain (Free verse) by joydoll
I push it down, Try to bury it. I block it out, Try to forget it. I turn my head, Try to avoid it. I close my eyes, Try to ignore it. I run away, Try to escape it. I hurt myself, Try to outdo it.

Up the ladder: Erased
Down the ladder: Mistake or Misfortune

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6520
Posted: May 15, 2003 11:59 AM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2003 11:59 AM PDT
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[8] Felzpoet @ 68.194.177.30 | 18-May-03/2:53 PM | Reply
Know how u feel
[n/a] joydoll @ 195.93.49.14 > Felzpoet | 19-May-03/3:06 PM | Reply
check out my poem 'Choose'. you might like it.
[7] god'swife @ 198.81.26.113 | 6-Jun-03/11:17 AM | Reply
Eggggcellent!!! You're one angry young cunt, and I mean that witht the highest respect. Awareness is key, says my brother. Out-doing pain?! Wow another two-fisted thought. Thanks for the ammo.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > god'swife | 6-Jun-03/12:41 PM | Reply
Would you say the key to a woman's strength and solidarity is her birth canal?
[7] god'swife @ 64.12.96.234 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 6-Jun-03/7:48 PM | Reply
No.

I said Cunt, not Vagina. Cunt. Say it. KHH-UNNNNTT. There, now don't you feel better?

Everybody loves the Cunt.
Everybody was made and brought here by the Cunt.
Worship the Cunt.
The glorious
Juicy
Glossy
Slippery
Pulsing
Organ of Creation.
The Cock also rocks.
Cocks & Cunts. Oh, the luxury.

As if I was arrogant enough or stupid enough to believe I might have an answer to your question. The key is individual, each woman carries her own lock. Like the door to a house. Only we aren't given the key to ourselves, we search for them. Cunts are one place for women to look for her key. Most women are orphans of the moon and her cycles. If a woman learned, through daily observation, the relationship her cunt has with the moon, things would be better for her. She would add a new chapter to the book of things she understands about herself, an important chapter, and one day she'll finish the book, the door to her house will open.

Don't mis-understand, I'm not saying that women, because they contain the Cunt are superior, nor am I excluding persons who identify with the Cunt but are born without one. I'm telling you there are so many reasons to love the Cunt! I do think it adds to the sense of solidarity human beings feel towards each other, yes, as I said it catapulted us all here. Everyone has a belly button, we are all tied to the same ancient even prehistoric Cunts. We are Cunt-cousins, you and I. We're family.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > god'swife | 7-Jun-03/5:26 AM | Reply
So yes, but only if you use a naughty word for it?
[7] god'swife @ 198.81.26.203 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 7-Jun-03/1:28 PM | Reply
You're so stubborn, my answer is clearly, NO, I don't believe the birth canal is the key to a women's strength and solidarity. I callled the nice young lady an angry Cunt. I said absolutely nothing else. YOU assumed the rest. By the way the word Cunt was a extremely respected title for a woman, back in the day. Cunt is related to words from various languages all synonymous with "woman" or more accurately "powerful woman". Ask yourself why our culture uses that word to convey negative meanings about women now? Gee might have anything to do with the mysogynstic patriarichal phallic power worshipers, i.e. The Church & The King? Why do you think something so wonderous and amazing is naughty? My jewel, my jewel, my fabulously lush Cunt. The word and the anatomical part were the nexus of many early religions. Cunt was once a Divine word.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 > god'swife | 7-Jun-03/2:22 PM | Reply
I didn't "assume" anything. You just assumed I did. And when you ASSUME you make an ASS out of U and ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Also, you have just invented that etymology of 'cunt'. And even if it was true, your argument that it's naughty because men are afraid of powerful women (or whatever your argument is) is plainly silly. There are dozens of naughty synonyms for 'vagina', and none of them have anything to do with being 'powerful'.

Perhaps it is time to get over your obsession with genders. I say that in parting because I don't expect you to actually reply to any of my actual points, so I thought I might as well give you a starting point for your unconnected rant.
[7] god'swife @ 152.163.253.38 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 7-Jun-03/6:10 PM | Reply
I did invent anything. You're just ignorant. Vagina is not synonymous with Cunt, you dick. Cunt means everything not JUST the canal(Vagina originates from a word meaning sheath for a sword). Look up Cunina for one, or just take your head out of your ass. Read M. Esther Harding, Barbara G. Walker, or Joseph Campbell,if you must. My arguement is not that men are afraid of powerful women. My arguement is that once upon a time some men decided, either consciously or unconsciously, that they'd take it all for themselves. They used the excuse of one patriarchal god to murder and conquer and make thenselves Kings. They outlawed sex, and polygamy. They diabolized the Cunt, and that is an absolute reality of human history. Everybody is powerful.
[7] god'swife @ 152.163.253.38 > god'swife | 7-Jun-03/6:12 PM | Reply
By the way I don't know any naughty words that are synonyms for vagina? Care to share a few? Naughty, ha, what an ass you are.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.96 > god'swife | 8-Jun-03/4:52 AM | Reply
What about:

yeast trolley, Margaret Twatcher, the crazy world of Arthur Brown, onion filter, axe wound, insideout pumpkin gadget, scoffing tuna, The Sixteenth Goat Disaster of 1869, Christ's Folly, Aladdin's Cave of Fish, Henrietta's Handy Cap, The Bernard Experiment, Kentucky Fried Knicker Bacon, cock socket, "pass the malt", Cyclical Ketchup Monstrosity, The Black Hole of Reason and Automatic IQ Lowerer?
[7] god'swife @ 64.12.96.234 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 8-Jun-03/8:39 AM | Reply
These are great, thank you! Did you make some of these up, because they're really funny? With the exception of axe wound, that makes me cross and uncross my legs in discomfort. Also yeast trolley is a bit too demeaning don't you think? My favorites are CKM, BHR, and AIL. Can you please list the colloquialisms for cock, I want to make a poster. Thank you in advance.

Maybe you could write a poem. We really shouldn't be using this poem's comments for our little discussion. Especially since you've appointed yourself the Vigilante of the Chat Room. You're setting a bad example. By the way, how's it hangin'?
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