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Pain (Free verse) by joydoll

I push it down, Try to bury it. I block it out, Try to forget it. I turn my head, Try to avoid it. I close my eyes, Try to ignore it. I run away, Try to escape it. I hurt myself, Try to outdo it.

god'swife 6-Jun-03/11:17 AM
Eggggcellent!!! You're one angry young cunt, and I mean that witht the highest respect. Awareness is key, says my brother. Out-doing pain?! Wow another two-fisted thought. Thanks for the ammo.




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