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Pain (Free verse) by joydoll

I push it down, Try to bury it. I block it out, Try to forget it. I turn my head, Try to avoid it. I close my eyes, Try to ignore it. I run away, Try to escape it. I hurt myself, Try to outdo it.

god'swife 8-Jun-03/8:39 AM
These are great, thank you! Did you make some of these up, because they're really funny? With the exception of axe wound, that makes me cross and uncross my legs in discomfort. Also yeast trolley is a bit too demeaning don't you think? My favorites are CKM, BHR, and AIL. Can you please list the colloquialisms for cock, I want to make a poster. Thank you in advance.

Maybe you could write a poem. We really shouldn't be using this poem's comments for our little discussion. Especially since you've appointed yourself the Vigilante of the Chat Room. You're setting a bad example. By the way, how's it hangin'?




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