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Erased (Free verse) by joydoll
Rub it out.
Wipe it clean.
Erase it so you can make the same mistake again...
Can't bear that sound,
The constant scratching of erasers
On the surface of my soul.
The paper of my heart is wearing thin.
Once more and I'll be torn.
Beyond repair?
Thereâs no spare copy, no extra sheet
On which to trace my life.
I'm tattered and undesirable,
No longer myself.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6548
Posted: May 14, 2003 1:51 PM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2003 1:51 PM PDT
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