replying on Solitude by Owner of the Sky
7 Jan 2003, 10:29 AM
That's great! Here at poemeranker, we don't mind if you 'hang out' at other poetry sites! That's one of the great things about the internet! You can go to many poetry sites! Not just one! lol! It's also a great way to meet other Christians!
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
7 Jan 2003, 6:53 AM
Replace the 'l' with an 'n'
replying on Solitude by Owner of the Sky
7 Jan 2003, 6:52 AM
That's ok, Owner of the Sky! This is a friendly community and we welcome newcomers! Poemeranker is a great place to meet other Christians and share in fellowship!
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
6 Jan 2003, 10:32 AM
No. Replace 'stalks' with 'breaks wind'
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
6 Jan 2003, 10:30 AM
Yeah no worries cheers mate! maybe catch you down the pub for laugh with the lads and a few beers! beer is so important to me. But not as important as saying the word 'beer' in a really cool way to all my friends! Nice one! Cheers!
on The poemranker desk by lunar
4 Jan 2003, 2:56 PM
"69" is the best bit.
replying on I Love You!! by Babieflirt
3 Jan 2003, 7:51 PM
Thanks. I thought I'd try to take my work in a new direction with this username - it seems to have worked out well!!
replying on Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Jan 2003, 9:42 AM
You did it beautifully, as long as your accent is warped enough to make 'staple' rhyme with 'ecumenical' and 'upstream' rhyme with 'palfrey' ???
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on Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Jan 2003, 9:32 AM
Indeede my poeme is not a Vilanelle. I just made up the rhyme scheme and decided to call it a Vilanelle. In much the same way I used to call all my poemes Concrete because most people have no idea what the fuck Concrete is, and also because I found it amusing when people kept posting outraged comments saying "This aint concrete!"
Oh, and by the way -
This aint Vilanelle!
Oh, and by the way -
This aint Vilanelle!
on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!
2 Jan 2003, 5:59 PM
Replace the last word with "The victim's shoes are consumed."
replying on if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
2 Jan 2003, 5:56 PM
What if the people to whom you are causing pain, are themselves causing even more people even more pain? Could you bear to cause them pain? Or would you walk by on the other side while nudeful children cried? Cross over the road my friend! Ask the Lord His strength to lend! His compassion has no end! Cross over the road.
on if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
2 Jan 2003, 5:49 PM
Hilarious!
replying on Found Lost by Carvaceous
2 Jan 2003, 5:42 PM
lol! But I'm afraid your secret is that once upon a time you were at a sleep over at your friend's house and you did a poo in your bed and you were so ashamed that you secretly exchanged your soiled linen with the linen in your friend's bed so that it was they who were severely beaten, not you. My God you're disgusting!
replying on IRONSHOE by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
2 Jan 2003, 3:23 PM
Haven't you ever seen the classic 60's detective show entitled "Ironside"? It's about a hard-nosed, tough-talking detective called Ironside, who has suffered spinal damage following a gunshot wound and has to travel around in a steel wheelchair solving crimes. If not, then I'm afraid you aren't allowed to read my poeme.
http://web.ukonline.co.uk/craig.pierce2/
http://web.ukonline.co.uk/craig.pierce2/
replying on haunter of the dark by razorgrin
1 Jan 2003, 12:49 PM
I bet you would enjoy the song "Ea, Lord of the Depths" by Burzum.
on haunter of the dark by razorgrin
1 Jan 2003, 12:31 AM
This reminds me of that "hamish hamish bo-bamish fanafanafo-famish me-mi-mo-mamish: hamish" thing, except it would be impossible to do with Nyarlathotep. AAAA+++++ WOULD BUY AGAIN.