Re: a comment on Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?!	7-Jan-03/3:16 PM
And I can tell you have a mediocre mind because the stench of mediocrity hangs thick in the air about you. Gently, furtively it wafts into the hearts and souls of Good Christian Gentlemen and polutes flagrantly with filthy lies and corrupt moral values. It is the stench of wretchedness; the stench of indolence; the stench of a working-class household... it is the stench of soiled linen. I don't like it, I say! I don't like it one bit!!!
Re: a comment on Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?!	7-Jan-03/2:03 PM
I hate you, lunar.
Re: To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan	7-Jan-03/2:00 PM
"beautific Dream" - "beautific" is not a word. Though I suppose you could make it up and say it means "beautiful". However, "beatific" IS a word. Perhaps you meant to say "beatific"? If so, that's great! "Scores of tunes entuned and I deem" - what do you 'deem'? Doesn't make any sense at all! Though I daresay it does rhyme with dream! Great work! "O my brittle of a voice" - this line also doesn't make sense.
Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!	7-Jan-03/1:46 PM
I hate you, lunar.
Re: Shark by cleverdevice	7-Jan-03/10:41 AM
Knives. The word 'knifes' is the third person singular of the verb 'to knife'. For insance, "The disgruntled weaver knifes your face with some knives."
Re: a comment on Solitude by Owner of the Sky	7-Jan-03/10:29 AM
That's great! Here at poemeranker, we don't mind if you 'hang out' at other poetry sites! That's one of the great things about the internet! You can go to many poetry sites! Not just one! lol! It's also a great way to meet other Christians!
Re: lost love by cherish	7-Jan-03/9:20 AM
My God! This poeme is so beautiful! 10/10!!!!!!!11
Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!	7-Jan-03/6:53 AM
Replace the 'l' with an 'n'
Re: a comment on Solitude by Owner of the Sky	7-Jan-03/6:52 AM
That's ok, Owner of the Sky! This is a friendly community and we welcome newcomers! Poemeranker is a great place to meet other Christians and share in fellowship!
Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!	6-Jan-03/10:32 AM
No. Replace 'stalks' with 'breaks wind'
Re: a comment on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!	6-Jan-03/10:30 AM
Yeah no worries cheers mate! maybe catch you down the pub for laugh with the lads and a few beers! beer is so important to me. But not as important as saying the word 'beer' in a really cool way to all my friends! Nice one! Cheers!
Re: The poemranker desk by lunar	4-Jan-03/2:56 PM
"69" is the best bit.
Re: a comment on I Love You!! by Babieflirt	3-Jan-03/7:51 PM
Thanks. I thought I'd try to take my work in a new direction with this username - it seems to have worked out well!!
Re: Caged by TxMstng02	3-Jan-03/1:43 PM
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. 10!!!1
Re: a comment on Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Jan-03/9:42 AM
You did it beautifully, as long as your accent is warped enough to make 'staple' rhyme with 'ecumenical' and 'upstream' rhyme with 'palfrey' ??? A A- A V B B- B W C C- C X D D- D Y E E- E Z
Re: Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>	3-Jan-03/9:32 AM
Indeede my poeme is not a Vilanelle. I just made up the rhyme scheme and decided to call it a Vilanelle. In much the same way I used to call all my poemes Concrete because most people have no idea what the fuck Concrete is, and also because I found it amusing when people kept posting outraged comments saying "This aint concrete!" Oh, and by the way - This aint Vilanelle!
Re: Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!	2-Jan-03/5:59 PM
Replace the last word with "The victim's shoes are consumed."
Re: a comment on if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey	2-Jan-03/5:56 PM
What if the people to whom you are causing pain, are themselves causing even more people even more pain? Could you bear to cause them pain? Or would you walk by on the other side while nudeful children cried? Cross over the road my friend! Ask the Lord His strength to lend! His compassion has no end! Cross over the road.
Re: if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey	2-Jan-03/5:49 PM
Hilarious!
Re: a comment on Found Lost by Carvaceous	2-Jan-03/5:42 PM
lol! But I'm afraid your secret is that once upon a time you were at a sleep over at your friend's house and you did a poo in your bed and you were so ashamed that you secretly exchanged your soiled linen with the linen in your friend's bed so that it was they who were severely beaten, not you. My God you're disgusting!