poemranker ::20 most recent comments by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. (2421-2440) and replies

Comments by-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I., 2421–2440 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan 8 Jan 2003, 12:25 AM
Sure thing! I enjoy helping those less fortunate than myself!

P.S. It's "a lot".
P.P.S. It's "grammar".
replying on alms by famenglory 7 Jan 2003, 11:09 PM
And I can't see you every night.
on Bliss Eternal by Freethinker1602 7 Jan 2003, 9:04 PM
this is soooo beautiful lol ^_^ hey mbe l8er we can get together?? ok asl
replying on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 7 Jan 2003, 9:03 PM
I do not like to say it, but you are a cad.
replying on electronically by Quarton 7 Jan 2003, 7:40 PM
No.
on insomnia by Bill Z Bub 7 Jan 2003, 7:34 PM
If you removed the first bit and the title, it would be an ace ending to a tale of creeping horror.
replying on alms by famenglory 7 Jan 2003, 7:28 PM
Wait, yes.
replying on alms by famenglory 7 Jan 2003, 7:14 PM
No.
on Untimely Demise by marvelis 7 Jan 2003, 6:58 PM
So it is the people of average strength who will remain standing? I suggest you read my poeme "Unwanted gift".
on Apocalypse by marvelis 7 Jan 2003, 6:50 PM
I was in the Drawing Room, belaboring Colonel Mustard with the Shoe-horne. Where were you?
on alms by famenglory 7 Jan 2003, 6:50 PM
THIS SURE IS GREAT.
on electronically by Quarton 7 Jan 2003, 6:48 PM
too many ellipses...tired theme
the final verse...doesn't rhyme
on Backwards baby blend by Blade 7 Jan 2003, 6:45 PM
For a minute I thought you were watching Brain Dead in reverse, but then I realised it doesn't have this scene.
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! 7 Jan 2003, 6:26 PM
It is this blasted cream. The doctor told me it would cure my terrible palsy, but it has not. Indeede, it may not.
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! 7 Jan 2003, 6:16 PM
Sir,

I am a Gentleman. Lunar is an Old Hagg, whose Presence in Town is always known by the Fearful Stench she emits. No Mayor in the Land would permit our Matrimony, no matter how terrifying an Expression I intimidate him with. No; our love, such as it is, is destined to Failure. Plus, she's totally rough.
replying on Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?! 7 Jan 2003, 3:16 PM
And I can tell you have a mediocre mind because the stench of mediocrity hangs thick in the air about you. Gently, furtively it wafts into the hearts and souls of Good Christian Gentlemen and polutes flagrantly with filthy lies and corrupt moral values. It is the stench of wretchedness; the stench of indolence; the stench of a working-class household... it is the stench of soiled linen. I don't like it, I say! I don't like it one bit!!!
replying on Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?! 7 Jan 2003, 2:03 PM
I hate you, lunar.
on To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan 7 Jan 2003, 2:00 PM
"beautific Dream" - "beautific" is not a word. Though I suppose you could make it up and say it means "beautiful". However, "beatific" IS a word. Perhaps you meant to say "beatific"? If so, that's great!

"Scores of tunes entuned and I deem" - what do you 'deem'? Doesn't make any sense at all! Though I daresay it does rhyme with dream! Great work!

"O my brittle of a voice" - this line also doesn't make sense.
replying on Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?! 7 Jan 2003, 1:46 PM
I hate you, lunar.
on Shark by cleverdevice 7 Jan 2003, 10:41 AM
Knives. The word 'knifes' is the third person singular of the verb 'to knife'. For insance,

"The disgruntled weaver knifes your face with some knives."