Re: You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger	15-Feb-06/3:31 PM
awesome love the visuals
Re: I am the gayest by walrus8	14-Feb-06/11:55 AM
lol Mr Gayness
Re: a comment on Journeyman by Glasseyez	14-Feb-06/11:44 AM
Yea I meant four of the seven seas, but i thought that would sound too drawn out, I actually have heard that before, maybe i will just pick up a poetry for dummies book something informative just so I can know the proper way to write a decent poem, with the grammer and all. I appreciate your constructive criticm, thinking of ways to use it without ruining the poems altogether. I am still on the level where i just write what sounds good to me and makes sense. I need to work on using metaphors better and more often. I wrote this listening to johnny cash so I guess I was just thinking about his voice while working on it.
Re: The Emptiness Of My Soul by edgar-allen-poe-rox	14-Feb-06/11:20 AM
More to live than women/men. Try bowling it feels empowering to knock pins over with a ball. No idea why
Re: Escape by raven_the_poet	14-Feb-06/11:06 AM
This angry world nothing but a race. change that this will be great now its good.
Re: Sonnet for Snow by ecargo	14-Feb-06/12:44 AM
Great I love it (We knock to make the red squirrel peek out, scold.) watch out he'll throw a nut at you
Re: The Virgin by cleverdevice	14-Feb-06/12:33 AM
Yea I had a ladyfriend once whos flesh was like yogurt, twas an Eskimo from canada, needless to say she came down to Florida to stay awhile and her yogurt skin curdled turning out to be a 400 lb. behimoth. God bless e-haromy.com and their misrepresented clientel. Yet to have a refund Anyhow love the poem I give it a ten because of the fond memories it brings of my made up life in Tallahassee
Re: a comment on A Soldiers Story by Glasseyez	13-Feb-06/4:53 PM
lots of fun you tons definately forced "the blues may be forced", I know I probably need to find other words for these maybe touch the whole thing up when I have the time
Re: a comment on Moonlight Paradox by Glasseyez	13-Feb-06/3:32 PM
The paradox is in that it IS pointless from a glance, but I wrote it so that I could reveal that so is every other religious doctrine. It is supposed to get you thinking, its next to impossible to get everything I explained, out of this alone. The Moonlight Paradox was never supposed to be about a Paradox, thus the Paradox, its unexpected. Like the Parables and stories in the bible were never supposed to be about planting a field or eating a forbidden apple. That is really all I meant to point out. We all DO have a purpose in life, just as the 2nd stanza being wrote frontways and backways in this poem had a purpose. For you I guess in was just to piss you off, but it was supposed to symbolize a balance. That email chain was horribly written, yes, but it did point out the irony of today, some were not all true but I did'nt feel the need to waste my time correcting the mistakes. Paradoxes are real but they aren't magic, you are correct. It is just an event. Ok but how easy is it to point out something is false? Why not try to point out what is true and bring it to peoples attention? It all seems more productive to me. So you might not have liked it but do not dismiss it as rubbish and post it as a comment saying how horrible you thought it was and that your opinion is gold, vote and forget it, someone may find meaning to it, that is all I want. To be honest I could care less if you're the smartest man/ woman to hit this century, good for you, want a cookie? Give me your adress I will send you a box of them, so long as you keep the pessimistic comments to yourself. If you wanted to judge my grammer usage, punctuation, or wording fine. But if you don't understand something "ask don't tell". I happen to like your work, hopefully one day I can write as good as you. Just started making mine public and do not have a hell of alot of experience. But I do read, and I do love it. Nice talking to you.
Re: Glasseyez is totally gay by w-=Dark_Angel=-,_P.I.w	13-Feb-06/2:33 PM
Who am I to argue with someone who has rhymed about shit, cocks, and cum for as long as they have been on this site?
Re: a comment on Moonlight Paradox by Glasseyez	12-Feb-06/7:52 PM
Ah zodiac, your opinion is over rated, one of bleak understanding and simple mindedness, I write usually to prove a point not to create a masterpiece. The definition of a paradox. 1. a statement that seems contradictory, absurd, etc. but may be true in fact. Here are some "paradoxes of our times" We have taller buildings, but shorter tempers; wider freeways, but narrower viewpoints; we spend more, but have less; we buy more, but enjoy it less. We have bigger houses and smaller families; more conveniences, but less time; we have more degrees, but less common sense; more knowledge, but less judgment; more experts, but more problems; more medicine, but less wellness. We spend too recklessly, laugh too little, drive too fast, get too angry too quickly, stay up too late, get up too tired, read too seldom, watch TV too much, and pray too seldom. We have multiplied our possessions, but reduced our values. We talk too much, love too seldom and lie too often. We've learned how to make a living, but not a life; we've added years to life, not life to years. We build more computers to hold more information, to produce more copies than ever, but have less communication; we've become long on quantity, but short on quality. We've been all the way to the moon and back, but have trouble crossing the street to meet the new neighbor. We've conquered outer space, but not inner space; we've done larger things, but not better things; we've cleaned up the air, but polluted the soul; we've split the atom, but not our prejudice; we write more, but learn less; plan more, but accomplish less. We've learned to rush, but not to wait; we have higher incomes; but lower morals; more food but less appeasement; more acquaintances, but fewer friends; more effort but less success. These are the time of fast foods and slow digestion; tall men and short character; steep profits, and shallow relationships. These are the times of world peace, but domestic warfare; more leisure and less fun; more kinds of food, but less nutrition. These are days of two incomes, but more divorce; of fancier houses, but broken homes. These are days of quick trips, disposable diapers, throwaway morality, one-night stands, overweight bodies, and pills that do everything from cheer, to quiet, to kill. It is a time when there is much in the show window, and nothing in the stockroom. Indeed it's all true. Think about it...read it again.
Re: a comment on Prozac by Glasseyez	11-Feb-06/11:10 PM
before me as in what is in front of me.
Re: Unless by rahson_s	11-Feb-06/10:15 PM
nice poem but i agree with wilco
Re: Unless Redux by rahson_s	11-Feb-06/10:08 PM
it could have done without this "blow jobs and black kisses, crackers, niggas and spics" maybe reword it some, the rest of the poem I like alot 8
Re: Partying Blind by poetry/poem101	11-Feb-06/9:45 PM
Yea I really dislike the MAA group( no offence to mother). But they are taking it a little too far renaming SPORTS teams things like cross stitch and sloth. Its like their goal is to baby their kids through life so they grow up gentle. What they don't take into consideration is that in doing that their children never have the chance to rise above, and that doing this creates generations of softcore pussies with "I am the center of the Universe" outlooks on life, never to be sucessful. Love the stories man, keep on truckin, it is nice to see that even though you are blind you have the desire to write.
Re: a comment on Partying Blind by poetry/poem101	11-Feb-06/9:31 PM
Blind people have a special program that reads to them everything that is on the screen in an automated voice and their keyboards have brail on them.
Re: The Acorn Daisies by MacFrantic	11-Feb-06/9:14 PM
Its a nice piece of work, I havent heard the word mottled used in a while. 8
Re: a comment on Racial Hate by Glasseyez	11-Feb-06/3:48 PM
I will believe it when I see it, till then I am none of the above, funny though
Re: a comment on Racial Hate by Glasseyez	11-Feb-06/2:07 PM
I find it interesting that you have seen a baby weild an oozie firstly. Secondly that you are throwing blankets over babies faces. I could imagine no baby to like having a blanket over their face, they would probably all cry no matter the race. I admit the poem is not well written compared to others here, but I assure you that the message is accurate and it is quite sensible. But many people have their heads too far up their own asses to grasp that.
Re: Frozen Angel by Ranger	10-Feb-06/7:48 PM
I think this is great