| Re: Faith on a cross by Caducus |
9-Feb-06/9:27 PM |
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That was good I like the visuals I get from this
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| Re: My Fatherâs World by Dovina |
9-Feb-06/9:30 PM |
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This is nice I like the way you write
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| Re: Racism 4 by Dovina |
9-Feb-06/9:32 PM |
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| Re: The Book of Images by Dovina |
9-Feb-06/9:38 PM |
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| Re: Going Away to Fight a War by wilco |
10-Feb-06/10:42 AM |
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Its great the way you explain the life of a soldier
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| Re: Frozen Angel by Ranger |
10-Feb-06/7:48 PM |
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| Re: The Acorn Daisies by MacFrantic |
11-Feb-06/9:14 PM |
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Its a nice piece of work, I havent heard the word mottled used in a while. 8
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| Re: Partying Blind by poetry/poem101 |
11-Feb-06/9:45 PM |
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Yea I really dislike the MAA group( no offence to mother). But they are taking it a little too far renaming SPORTS teams things like cross stitch and sloth. Its like their goal is to baby their kids through life so they grow up gentle. What they don't take into consideration is that in doing that their children never have the chance to rise above, and that doing this creates generations of softcore pussies with "I am the center of the Universe" outlooks on life, never to be sucessful. Love the stories man, keep on truckin, it is nice to see that even though you are blind you have the desire to write.
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11-Feb-06/9:59 PM |
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I hate what the muslim extremists have done to such a peaceful religion.
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| Re: Unless Redux by rahson_s |
11-Feb-06/10:08 PM |
it could have done without this "blow jobs and
black kisses, crackers, niggas and spics" maybe reword it some, the rest of the poem I like alot 8
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| Re: Unless by rahson_s |
11-Feb-06/10:15 PM |
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nice poem but i agree with wilco
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11-Feb-06/10:25 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Feb-06/10:32 PM |
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You know I like this one but you still owe me proof that negro babies shoot you with oozies if you throw blankets over their heads. This reminds me of Jerusalem for some odd reason. 9
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| Re: Glasseyez is totally gay by w-=Dark_Angel=-,_P.I.w |
13-Feb-06/2:33 PM |
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Who am I to argue with someone who has rhymed about shit, cocks, and cum for as long as they have been on this site?
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| Re: The Virgin by cleverdevice |
14-Feb-06/12:33 AM |
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Yea I had a ladyfriend once whos flesh was like yogurt, twas an Eskimo from canada, needless to say she came down to Florida to stay awhile and her yogurt skin curdled turning out to be a 400 lb. behimoth. God bless e-haromy.com and their misrepresented clientel. Yet to have a refund Anyhow love the poem I give it a ten because of the fond memories it brings of my made up life in Tallahassee
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| Re: Sonnet for Snow by ecargo |
14-Feb-06/12:44 AM |
Great I love it
(We knock to make the red squirrel peek out, scold.)
watch out he'll throw a nut at you
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| Re: Escape by raven_the_poet |
14-Feb-06/11:06 AM |
This angry world nothing but a race.
change that this will be great now its good.
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| Re: The Emptiness Of My Soul by edgar-allen-poe-rox |
14-Feb-06/11:20 AM |
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More to live than women/men. Try bowling it feels empowering to knock pins over with a ball. No idea why
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| Re: I am the gayest by walrus8 |
14-Feb-06/11:55 AM |
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| Re: You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger |
15-Feb-06/3:31 PM |
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