Free verse № 137927
The Book of Images
Man has always pushed his arts
to make them move and move us.
From cave-drawn mastodons
to Odyssey,
he always seeks the means.
Strip away the preaching,
prophecy and teaching,
things folks often quibble with.
The majority remainsâ
intriguing story,
parable and imageâ
visual aids and moving scenes.
Sin is crouching at your door,
we hear it said to Cain.
A tree by living water,
says the psalmist of a saint.
Like windblown chaff,
the wicked are.
Like growing fruit,
are good menâs deeds.
Godâs a shield around us
with no apology given.
And hearing we are salt,
conjures preservation or
holding back corruption.
That wild donkey, Ishmael,
Abraham and Hagar bore,
how so his seed today?
His eye is on the sparrow
and sees the one that falls.
Hear what you can hear.
Lips that drip with honey,
the end is bitter gall.
Hear with ears to hear.
A farmer sows his hard-won seed.
Some falls where it cannot grow.
But some take root in fertile earth.
Without a parable, He hardly spoke.
If a priceless treasure hides,
buy the land that holds it,
no matter what the cost.
Wisdom is an ornament
draped about your neck,
and blameless hands are clean
though working in the field.
Like a watchman awaits
the certain dawn,
so live.
Like a thief at night,
I stole these words,
And if faithful, will be stolen too.
47 comments
So I see.
Putting a picture into a frame doesn't make you the creator of that picture--so what's the point of this? To signal appreciation? Something else?
Ever read "On First Looking into Chapman's Homer" by Keats? A good example of being inspired by beauty to make something equally (or more) beautiful.
When you see a McDonalds commercial you're inspired to eat greasy food not experiencing a life changing moment. So do your thing girl and I'll try to be less of a smartass in the future.
If the imagery is common, why do we need a poem to point it out? We know already--it's "common." They're idiomatic for a reason--"someone thought it was a good way of communicating," and apparently we agreed. Doesn't seem like you're saying much of anything at all.
More importantly, do you paint simply?
He rode into town to collect his wages,
on a wild donkey, Ishmaelâs seed,
wool on the beast and he alike,
and while in Rome, he did as the Romans,
Thus washing his hands of any sin.
He rode by the trees on the waterâs bank
and the chaff the reapers let fly.
The trees bore fruit, but the chaff blew away,
and our concealed manâs sin
crouched at his door.
Though he was sweating, he tasted no salt.
Covered in wool, he felt no shield.
He saw a sparrow fall,
and felt he was watched,
found a treasure in a field,
and stopped to dig it up.
He felt a seed fall upon him
and smartly brushed it away.
He collected his wages alright
when his white mount fell in the mud.
It was still well worth the read though.
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It's often in the little imperfections that we find the most unique beauty.
Dyslexics aren't dim. Many are genuises. We think with images more than with language so we tend to be more artistic too.
But I think you meant something like ironically dim.
Favourited ! well done.
As for the disappearing comments, I'm sure there's something not quite right going on at the moment, lots of poems are listed as having more comments than can be seen, and some are listed as having none when they have been commented on.
It's an enigma.
If a comment is deleted, it still counts in the number of comments, so the counter is not a reliable guide. Also, if a poem has received comments, but no votes, the comments do not always enter the comment counter.
No, what happened to
Alchemy's comments needs a better explanation.
Merry X.
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