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Sonnet for Snow (Sonnet) by ecargo
In these woods, the mind turns to small matters,
the eye turns to truer treasures:
a mouse trail curving through the skim of snow
pauses riverside, meanders on,
lost to red-tail swaying into wind;
a white pine drilled with Pileated holes.
(We knock to make the red squirrel peek out, scold.)
I shake the snow-webs free from spreading pines,
and laugh as snow-spray coats you white, below.
We chase our beckoning shadows, as we wind
through stands of silver beech, a copse of snow-
brushed spruce, great spires rising to the sky.
Our breath soughs, forming patterns in the air,
and words hang weblike, scatter, disappear.
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.875
Weighted score: 6.3110895
Overall Rank: 866
Posted: February 13, 2006 10:31 PM PST; Last modified: February 13, 2006 11:01 PM PST
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(We knock to make the red squirrel peek out, scold.)
watch out he'll throw a nut at you