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The Emptiness Of My Soul (Free verse) by edgar-allen-poe-rox
I have no feelings, like I had before They don’t exist, not anymore. They’ve been killed, kind of… washed away, Without my feelings, life is gray. I wish my life was over, at its end For myself, I can not fend. I’m basically dead it seems to me, Put me out of my misery. I’m wounded and I’m bleeding out, I sit on the ground, and quietly pout. I’m losing blood at an alarming rate, I think I might die, this is great. I’m forever without a loving mate, To die alone, it is my fate…

Up the ladder: Humidity
Down the ladder: catastrophe

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7141
Posted: February 14, 2006 8:05 AM PST; Last modified: February 14, 2006 8:05 AM PST
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[6] Glasseyez @ 204.49.132.56 | 14-Feb-06/11:20 AM | Reply
More to live than women/men. Try bowling it feels empowering to knock pins over with a ball. No idea why
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