Free verse № 138541
My Fatherâs World
He opened my eyes, let me see
Said, Fire, fire! Turn a hose on me
He showed me a world as true as clay
Then went his solitary way
He took me to work to rake the leaves
A canvas tarp on his shoulder heaved
How many loads before he sat?
More than you can shake a stick at
Let me ride the horsy, Daddy
My gumptionâs gone, my little lady
Wish I had the preacherâs unction
He cut roses, not the blooms
shunned thorns, cigarettes and booze
ushered on Sunday, shins blacked and blued
by rocks the renovator threw
I proudly showed one too
My bloody finger from a rosy thorn
a price too small, a gift too meager
To know his conduct matched his prayers
24 comments
If "More than you can shake a stick at" was something he said alot (which is just my hunch) then put it in quotations please. I thought it was a great sentiment and quite deep. Well expressed D.
By the way- Love the "gumption" "unction" half rhyme.
I predict a riot (in Beirut).
looks like Mohammed
lets kill the hamburger freaks
we'll shoot 'em
and loot 'em
and cut off their heads
but who made this ugly connection?
And Iran wonders why the US doesn't want it to have nuclear capability...
Religion is interesting and wistful and nostalgic. To many people, itâs even important.
Would a working class guy who uses words like gumption know that unction means ointment? seems like a funny word to use.
Other than that this is a fine poem. It is devoid of your usual pretention and that is why we continue to argue with you. At the back of our minds we think 'yeah, she talks ass, but in time she'll reflect on our advice and realise we were correct'. It makes it all worth while for me.
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