| Re: The Wife and the Spider by Caducus |
20-May-06/3:41 AM |
I don't know why she swallowed the spider
that wiggled and jiggled and giggled inside her.
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| Re: Foray by richa |
20-May-06/3:37 AM |
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How far can a man walk into a forest?
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| Re: Numbers add to nothing by Caducus |
20-May-06/3:27 AM |
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These mathmatical and number poems just don't do it for me.
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| Re: Seizures by Sunny |
20-May-06/3:07 AM |
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Sounds good. I have no idea what it means.
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| Re: a comment on 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy |
18-May-06/5:04 AM |
Transferrence of feeling?
I have no idea what you're talking about. I don't get how you get Jim Carrey out of it either. Think it's more like Weird Al Yankovic doing Amish Paradise.
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| Re: a comment on 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy |
18-May-06/4:57 AM |
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No hymens either. Isn't everyone in heaven pure and virtuous?
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| Re: test by zanzina |
18-May-06/4:53 AM |
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| Re: a comment on 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy |
17-May-06/12:49 PM |
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I should hope not. It started with me and Ranger wondering what anyone would do with 72 Islamic virgins. I mean you could deflower them but then what do you do for the rest of eternity? It's kinda vulgar, I know, but the song it parodies is kinda vulgar. I understand though. This definately isn't your cup of tea.
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| Re: a comment on Goa by amanda_dcosta |
17-May-06/12:40 PM |
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That's OK, I'm sure The Lord Good will forgive you :)
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| Re: a comment on 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy |
17-May-06/12:28 PM |
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I imagine they died fairly quickly, (not having a pee or poop hole to discharge urine and feces and all) Most likely from toxic shock.
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| Re: a comment on Lost In Her Effervescence by ALChemy |
17-May-06/12:22 PM |
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Yeah, "Suds" kinda bugged me too but froth was the only other word I could come up with and that sounded even worse. The blissful abyss line was sort of the image of someone the moment they succumb, arms outstretched, drifting. It seemed to just look rather blissful. I like your suggestion alot although it doesn't quite go with the loose half rhyme scheme I had going. You got me thinking now.
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| Re: a comment on 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy |
17-May-06/12:07 PM |
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I looking forward to your version too. But school work first, go on now get to work.
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| Re: a comment on 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy |
17-May-06/12:02 PM |
I know what you mean but I felt I had to stay as true to the song as I could and I mean look at the actual lyrics: http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/jayz/99problems.html
Not exactly Shakespeare. Plus I kinda rushed it. Maybe we should do more parodies around here, ya'know lighten the place up a little.
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| Re: a comment on 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy |
17-May-06/11:53 AM |
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| Re: 72 virgins (but the bitches ain't fun) by ALChemy |
17-May-06/7:53 AM |
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Oh now Edna, at least be brave enough to not to drop an "anonymous" turd on me. You know that it's funny.
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| Re: a comment on Tree of Life by ALChemy |
17-May-06/7:43 AM |
Esoteric is a good word to describe it.
That's usually a sign of a great poem.
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| Re: Old River Sherbourne by Caducus |
17-May-06/7:33 AM |
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| Re: a comment on A Snap Shot by amanda_dcosta |
17-May-06/7:18 AM |
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If you have a good sense of color theory and layout you can get away with alot of other weaknesses. Just say it's abstract or expressionistic. What's your difficulty? Maybe I can help.
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| Re: a comment on The Prodigal Daughter by Dovina |
17-May-06/7:09 AM |
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You'd think that opening you left for yourself would have brought Zodiac out of hiding almost instantly.
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| Re: a comment on The Prodigal Daughter by Dovina |
17-May-06/7:05 AM |
I already told you I was out of internet.
I meant what I said and I said what I meant.
I lost internet... 100 percent.
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