| Re: of Arabia by ecargo |
12-Jul-06/7:55 AM |
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Nicely written but to the epicness of the picture is lost in such a short poem. The second stanza should be stanza 10 and not 2.
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| Re: a comment on of Arabia by ecargo |
12-Jul-06/7:51 AM |
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| Re: Joshua And Ruth by amanda_dcosta |
8-Jul-06/2:45 AM |
"Suffer the little children to come unto Me, and forbid them not, for of such is the Kingdom of God."
Children will always remind us of what really matters.
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| Re: PHOTO by madamefrufru |
7-Jul-06/11:18 AM |
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The last stanza seems a little strange but the rest is good. I like your unlikely word choices.
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| Re: Orca by Dovina |
7-Jul-06/11:12 AM |
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He's going under to free Willy.
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| Re: a comment on Songs of the hedge bird by ALChemy |
5-Jul-06/2:25 PM |
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No need to worry about our little friend. He's in birdy heaven. I doubt much can harm him now.
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| Re: a comment on O say, can you see? by Dovina |
4-Jul-06/7:16 AM |
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It's just "bounded" to me implies actual borders or walls.
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| Re: a comment on Songs of the hedge bird by ALChemy |
3-Jul-06/10:35 AM |
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Thanks D. I like the way you put that.
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| Re: a comment on Songs of the hedge bird by ALChemy |
3-Jul-06/10:29 AM |
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I'm glad it matched it's inspiration.
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| Re: August 23, 1944 - 102 miles west of Paris by Ranger |
3-Jul-06/6:18 AM |
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Just watched "Saving Private Ryan" didn't you? Captured the end quite well and with few words.
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| Re: sayndewicches by FreeFormFixation |
3-Jul-06/6:13 AM |
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Caught the moment just right. Like reading Dr Suess on a bad acid trip.
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| Re: a comment on Goliath by amanda_dcosta |
3-Jul-06/6:05 AM |
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Giants always appear to be lazy, think about it. The Jolly Green Giant and Paul Bunyan are my only exceptions.
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| Re: Higher education by ecargo |
3-Jul-06/5:58 AM |
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I think I like it but it's probably because I'm reading the last verse as sexual innuendo.
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| Re: O say, can you see? by Dovina |
3-Jul-06/5:35 AM |
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The poem sounds like a battle along some border but I have no idea what border battle you're implying. Still I like the beat poet intensity of it's cadence.
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| Re: Goliath by amanda_dcosta |
2-Jul-06/1:39 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Aristocrats(Madlib for all those shock poets) by ALChemy |
30-Jun-06/7:59 PM |
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I can tell you read the original. I salute you for finding a way to make this disgusting joke only mildly offensive. This joke goes all the way back to Vaudeville days and a documentary featuring 100 celebrity comedians telling the joke was made. Just thought these shock poets should know where their roots are.
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| Re: Patio 95 by ecargo |
30-Jun-06/2:22 PM |
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| Re: Fallen Charub by Dovina |
30-Jun-06/10:53 AM |
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2 dozen roses mailed to the address of Dovina Goddess of the Grey-blue ocean of poetry.
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| Re: a comment on A Little War Victim by amanda_dcosta |
29-Jun-06/11:00 AM |
I just click the word "chat". Dang we were expecting you too. We were quite disappointed. She has all kinds of gossip for you.
I very happy to see you back by the way.
PS. Stop disappearing for weeks at a time dangit. This place ain't the same without you.
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| Re: Southern Baptist Redneck Song by Edna Sweetlove |
25-Jun-06/8:20 AM |
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