| Re: Flow by zodiac |
10-Jan-06/3:57 PM |
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That is a deep scar. Watch out if the tide gets too high or too low.
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| Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
10-Jan-06/11:38 AM |
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OK, BOTH OF YOU, TO YOUR ROOMS... Go on. Any more sass and I take away the XBOX.
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| Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
10-Jan-06/11:27 AM |
OK. Zodiac, quit calling her a blathering moron and walking off.
Is that better? Wanna lolipop?
It's not free. I often put my two cents in.
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| Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
10-Jan-06/11:17 AM |
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You two are just too damn entertaining when you argue.
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| Re: Oh Verrazano by Joe-joe |
10-Jan-06/11:16 AM |
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Find stuff that is more unique to this bridge so that it can't be applied to any other bridge. Kudos for choosing to write about a bridge in Brooklyn that's not the Brooklyn Bridge.
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| Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
10-Jan-06/11:01 AM |
Cut it out you two. I've had long discussions with both of you and I can say with a fair amount of certainty that both of you are good people who are plenty capable of caring for children and being open minded. Cyan9, I'm sure you're used to people misinterpreting your stuff as satanic or sadistic so just be patient. She's open minded enough to listen to your motive behind your poetry. Amanda, if I told you I listened to bands like "Tool" and read Clive Barker novels would you think anything less of me? I hope not. I know sometimes Cyan comes across a little harsh but he's a sensitive artist and sometimes his emotions get ahead of him. Give him a second chance to explain his motives behind his poetry.
OK I did what I could. If you two still want to fight go ahead.
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| Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
10-Jan-06/10:17 AM |
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Me niether, I'm just an uncle with an adoring niece and nephew. It's pure opinion coming out of me so yes, truthfully in my life there is nothing more important. When you discover and I'm sure you soon will how amazingly an adoring child can change the worst day of your life to one of the best days it think you too will love the idea that there's an angel out there who calls you uncle or even some day dad. With that said, it's not the only meaning of life and if you're never an uncle or father or whatever that's OK too. There are plenty of other reasons to love life.
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| Re: a comment on A New Year Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
10-Jan-06/10:00 AM |
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| Re: a comment on A New Year Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
10-Jan-06/10:00 AM |
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Appologies for the teener-poet remark. There's some really great teen poets here, you included but in general ALL CAPS is used to imply yelling or corporate names and lower-case is more for whispers and smallness. If you use it arbitrarily it can be disconcerting for the reader. I was over-exaggerating with the puking thing a bit.
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| Re: Reckoning by <~> |
9-Jan-06/4:16 PM |
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Has a groovy beat poem feel to it. It was pleasant to read but nothing much really stuck with me except the lines Zodiac already mentioned.
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| Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
9-Jan-06/10:15 AM |
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That's OK cyan9. It's about the most important priority in life, children.
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| Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
9-Jan-06/3:45 AM |
Thanks.
As of yet I have no idea what Oh Merry Fay - part II is going to be about. Maybe It'll be a prequel. The next one will likely be in a different style.(sans jibberish). The guy in the poem has a name now. It's Topper.
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| Re: a comment on A New Year Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
9-Jan-06/3:35 AM |
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At least you use capitals. If I see another teener-poet use "i" again I swear I'm gonna puke.
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| Re: Bloody Stools 'n' Butterflies by EAger to Offend |
9-Jan-06/3:32 AM |
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See all of Dark Angel's poems and then realize you're outmatched.
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| Re: portrait of powerlessness by digipoet |
9-Jan-06/3:26 AM |
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Do you and LilMsLadyPoet know each other?
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| Re: floss every day by digipoet |
9-Jan-06/3:21 AM |
I hope your being sarcastic. If you really think an orderly life is the answer than good luck with that.
As sarcasm I like it.
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| Re: a comment on A New Year Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
9-Jan-06/3:06 AM |
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| Re: a comment on philosophy of a new age by crazyknight |
9-Jan-06/2:59 AM |
Five syllable line,
seven syllable line and
five syllable line
Traditionally connecting to nature.
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| Re: a comment on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT |
9-Jan-06/2:25 AM |
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Ice roads don't go over land. That's why you've got to be a little crazy to drive them. Although I'm not sure Juneau has any. It might be a little too warm for it in the south of Alaska. Still a southerner even in Alaska Zodiac.
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| Re: A New Year Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
9-Jan-06/1:38 AM |
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Nice flow. Too many caps though.
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