Re: Missing - You by Skamper	1-Dec-07/10:34 PM
Nice flow.
Re: Before Dawn by Christof	1-Dec-07/10:30 PM
I'm sure there are more accurate adjectives for a teenage boy's bedsheets, but 9 for you.
Re: Over the Horizon by Miggy	1-Dec-07/10:27 PM
Sounds like a country song, I hate country songs.
Re: Easter Egg Hunt by Dovina	1-Dec-07/10:26 PM
So what you're saying is that God looks down on the brightest of humans like we look down on rotary telephones?
Re: A bereaved search by liya	1-Dec-07/10:20 PM
Good rhyming, and I guess form counts for something.
Re: Uptown spell! by liya	1-Dec-07/10:18 PM
I'm sorry for the shabby rating but this poem is just not my thing
Re: Engine Braking by INTRANSIT	1-Dec-07/10:08 PM
Not bad, good imagery, puts me there in the conductor chair (?)... but leaves me a little confused about why I'm reading this.
Re: I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom	15-Mar-06/1:35 AM
"Love bound to lust is cheap and dies with our youth, stealing innocence. I never wanted this"......... is what i liked about this.
Re: a comment on Settling in by INTRANSIT	15-Mar-06/1:30 AM
ecargo's got it! and i like the personification of the objects in your poem, which made me think of that song... i also had a run in with the song at the local karoke bar the other night, an old homeless lady kept going up and singing songs like that one, strangest experience in a few days, but i like in la/oc so i should be witnessing a stranger one any moment.
Re: a comment on Desolation by Beyond_Dreams	13-Mar-06/3:42 PM
what always bothers me is that when Green Day or U2 does it they are hailed as prolific artists with vision and great depth but when some Joe Everybody does it they are lamblasted as charlatans of the world of words.
Re: =, <>, & . . . by Dovina	13-Mar-06/3:35 PM
i would vote this a ~`&* but that option isnt available so a 7 will have to suffice.
Re: Numbers In Heaven by Dovina	13-Mar-06/3:34 PM
were you a math major in college?
Re: Settling in by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-06/3:16 PM
consider yourself part of the furniture
Re: By Request by thepinkbunnyofdoom	13-Mar-06/3:12 PM
very self referencial of this poem to self reference as it does so.
Re: Nude Falling Down Staircase by zodiac	13-Mar-06/2:04 PM
i am completely baffled with this one. maybe my two year break from poetry really disconnected me from the poetic beat or something
Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco	24-Nov-05/1:10 PM
this shouldnt be # 1, not saying it should be last though. maybe # 10293.
Re: Just A Dream by Blindpoetry	12-Jan-04/4:26 PM
things, brings, sings, strings, niiiice rhymes bro! ;p oh yeah, one and ton are sweet too!
Re: A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom	15-Aug-03/12:23 AM
nice little poem ya got here,
Re: Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL	15-Aug-03/12:11 AM
durkl, lovely little poem here, didnt see it comming, well until it plainly came that is, then i saw it.
Re: CrapBeer by DurtKL	15-Aug-03/12:09 AM
haha, yep, remember zima, how bout that new bicardi silver? but id take good old fashion wild berry wine coolers any day! now thats some man on man beer!