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A bereaved search (Other) by liya
Atop the meadows green
Stands her with mane so sheen
His gaze falls on her form so fine
Not quenching but seething his thirsty pine
Myriad feelings her smile induce
Provoking him to drown in it and douse
Her posture and grace equals a lord
Mused he was at how it strikes his every chord
Abrade blaze sets his eyes on fire
Smoldering his thoughts and wiping away all his dire
Looking at her he realizes with pleasure
How he wanted her to be his treasure
But time he has not to tell her you are the one
For war he has to fight and fame to be won
I will return to make you all mine
Promise he makes to himself and divine
Atop the meadows green
Stands a knight in armour so sheen
His gaze searches for her form so fine
Her eyes divine, as mellow as wine
But where is she his hearts desire
The one whose sight wipes away all his dire
The meadow is bare except for blooms so bright
Then it dawns on him that he is so late
Fame he has won but dame he has lost
Pricey are accolades but look what it has cost
For the very sight of her was his feverish drive
His solace, his sanity and all that make him thrive
Like a wounded beast who has been forfeited of all
Wandered he yonder for his missing soul
Atop the meadows where her thoughts dwell
Stands not the knight but just his soulless shell
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6943
Posted: November 28, 2007 3:29 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2007 3:29 AM PST
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