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Post-mortem (Free verse) by jen Love:
is that first crocodile tear,
fistful of fear
:an earthquake
of yes
& no, & yes
and starting all over again.
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*help me rework this if needed...
suggestions? If it helps, i'm a big e.e. cummings fan...
Up the ladder:
diamond embedded once before & always
Down the ladder:
Come Winter, I say!
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Posted: January 21, 2008 7:50 PM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2008 7:50 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0474257 Overall Rank: 6952 Comments:
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Ranger @ 81.152.176.86
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23-Jan-08/2:20 AM
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I don't like cummings so a comment would be unfair.
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 87.84.68.242
> Ranger
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23-Jan-08/5:09 AM
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Too late.
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