poemranker ::By Request by thepinkbunnyofdoom

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Free verse № 138144

By Request

Member since 2003 · Posted 2 Feb 2006 · 2 comments

Here is everything that was in my head at one moment, at one time. Flames of thought, burning bright, junping torch to torch in death, lighting dark recesses, buried beneath a coat of dust, being swept away, to be poured down the drain, as you question, these strange breath's that I call an answer, know that they are merely images, captured by a floating attention span, traslated to text, in my passing with a computer screen.

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[9] LilMsLadyPoet 2-Feb-06/7:26 PM Reply
Someone who does puncuation will probably count all those commas, and suggest a period here or there, instead...but, I'd be fine, and this would work without any punctuation at all...as the format guides italong just fine! (and thanks!)
[n/a] Dark Angle 13-Mar-06/3:12 PM Reply
very self referencial of this poem to self reference as it does so.