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By Request (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Here is everything that was in my head at one moment, at one time. Flames of thought, burning bright, junping torch to torch in death, lighting dark recesses, buried beneath a coat of dust, being swept away, to be poured down the drain, as you question, these strange breath's that I call an answer, know that they are merely images, captured by a floating attention span, traslated to text, in my passing with a computer screen.

Down the ladder: Last dance at the lake

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.2
Weighted score: 5.2622466
Overall Rank: 3961
Posted: February 2, 2006 3:57 PM PST; Last modified: February 2, 2006 3:57 PM PST
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[9] LilMsLadyPoet @ 207.69.139.134 | 2-Feb-06/7:26 PM | Reply
Someone who does puncuation will probably count all those commas, and suggest a period here or there, instead...but, I'd be fine, and this would work without any punctuation at all...as the format guides italong just fine! (and thanks!)
[n/a] Dark Angle @ 68.96.87.234 | 13-Mar-06/3:12 PM | Reply
very self referencial of this poem to self reference as it does so.
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