Re: a comment on Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom	6-Nov-02/12:07 PM
OH woe! Woe woe woe! Why did Trudeau have to leave us so soon? How we could have used him now to say 'Fuddle-duddle' to you all!
Re: Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom	6-Nov-02/11:59 AM
This is tripe. Tripe tripe tripe. Somebody should feed you to Sharon.
Re: a comment on A dutch poem (just a joke) by susie	6-Nov-02/11:05 AM
It's not the first complete foreign language poem here -- there's a Spanish one floating about somewhere. And at some point I will put up some of my french stuff, by special request. English has a great many ressemblances to German; the French impact on it is mainly in the words. Modern English is, after all, a mix of the Saxons language, which was Germanic/Nordic, and the French that the Normans brought with them when they took over the lovely isle back in 1066.
Re: a comment on Dead Poets' Society (Joke) by Yardbird	6-Nov-02/6:50 AM
Pah. I permit myself pissy little comments on anything I want to, Sir Yarbird! 'Whose', not 'who's', for God's sake. PLEASE. Though Wordsworth's personality is quite well put.
Re: a comment on Little Girl and Mom's mistake by t_t_redhot	6-Nov-02/6:49 AM
'There is' indeed... People are not asking for more blood here. We are asking for this to be something more than telling us what happened. This reads like a newspaper article. There is nothing interesting about it. It's very sad and all, but nothing more. as I said in a deleted comment, try writing it in nursery rhyme form. That might make it quite touching, if you did it well.
Re: Train by oohv	6-Nov-02/6:12 AM
You get points for 'Pokemon herpes'.
Re: ... by logun2002ya	6-Nov-02/6:10 AM
Eye hate to tell you this, but you haven't improved.
Re: ... by logun2002ya	6-Nov-02/6:09 AM
'You are my vision/of perfect sweet'... You ARE an imbecile.
Re: rules by roses are read	5-Nov-02/7:43 PM
Are those actually line breaks or is it a prose poem? I can't quite tell.
Re: Music by oohv	5-Nov-02/7:11 PM
Cut it up so that it's readable and I'll consider reading it.
Re: a comment on Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b by cacophony	5-Nov-02/12:23 PM
You ought to start on Scotch and stick to it.
Re: OUR FUTURE? by kliq	5-Nov-02/12:21 PM
Babies are made, but they still burn, dearie. Easily.
Re: untitled2 by PunchMeInTheFace	5-Nov-02/12:09 PM
Congratulations. You make me WANT to punch you in the face. Bravo for this piece, which is a magnificent work for getting others to fulfil your desire to get a broken nose. It actually looks as though it might be good. But cut it up, fer gawd's sake, cut it up!
Re: you are my concert by snacktime	5-Nov-02/12:06 PM
Bravo for knowing how to use musical imagery. Even more bravo for knowing how to use the word 'crescendo'.
Re: a comment on IM DANCING LIKE WIND by Prince of Void	5-Nov-02/12:04 PM
I don't think that would help, somehow.
Re: a comment on Wandering Spirit by angel_uy	5-Nov-02/12:04 PM
Let us be pithy: what you're trying to say is that it's excessively boring.
Re: untitled by bluwiz	5-Nov-02/12:00 PM
I can't help it. The first lines are far too redolent of Shakespeare's 'Timon of Athens' for me.
Re: HATE by Blade	5-Nov-02/11:50 AM
This actually made me laugh out loud. Congratulations. If I thought you meant it to, I'd give you a ten.
Re: I Love You, My Angel by mytenderrage	5-Nov-02/11:46 AM
'Your arms wrap around my FIGURE'? Even by the standards of pimple poetry, that's bad.
Re: Head-on Collision (True story) by t_t_redhot	5-Nov-02/11:45 AM
The ladies have said it all. 'So I have move on'? What?