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IM DANCING LIKE WIND (Free verse) by Prince of Void Im dancing like wind
Im living in future fear of emptieness
I have a faith in fame of happienesss
the flying of brid above ruin truth in madding hands
It'e tears and fears of tomorrow's names
I smiling when each season comes
and wake lost senses of peace
Agonizing shadows of poeple walking aimlessly
It goes on day after day
It ends in death of FORGEFUL path OF GRAVEYARD very simply
Up the ladder:
Unpleasant Morning
Down the ladder:
The toilet
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Posted: November 4, 2002 5:25 PM PST; Last modified: November 4, 2002 5:25 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.181818 Overall Rank: 13244 Comments:
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snacktime @ 66.185.84.72
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4-Nov-02/5:44 PM
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erm ... I would edit the spelling
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Tintagiles @ 198.164.238.88
> snacktime
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5-Nov-02/12:04 PM
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I don't think that would help, somehow.
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