Re: ... by logun2002ya	14-Nov-02/11:43 AM
'Eye pinch'? God that would hurt.
Re: a comment on Prose poem written in 1 minute and 27 seconds while listening to Slim Cessna croon by poetandknowit	14-Nov-02/11:42 AM
I'm greatly honoured. I like mine better, though. Is that supposd to be 'hoary' in the first line? (And to be pedantic, it looks rather cut up into lines to be a prose poem.)
Re: Tomorrow by joho117	13-Nov-02/6:52 AM
Well, personally, if I had known on the tenth of September last year what was going to happen the day after, there are a number of people I know I would have tried to convince go visit the World Trade Centre...
Re: L.O.V.E. by bxjay170	13-Nov-02/6:43 AM
I suspect you'd find them in the line breaks. This would explain why you never find love.
Re: A mans obligation by kliq	12-Nov-02/12:12 PM
Please tell me 'tow teachers' isn't a typo. It's much funnier as it is.
Re: Returning by INTRANSIT	12-Nov-02/12:08 PM
Okay, this is rather better.
Re: Handy Smurf by Bachus	12-Nov-02/11:22 AM
What the devil? Since when has there been one smurf smarter than the others? Oh, wait, this must be on the TV show or something. I'll stick to the originals, thanks.
Re: epicentre by richa	12-Nov-02/11:11 AM
Jesa. You sound like Guillevic. That's a compliment, by the way.
Re: Confusion by ThoughtfulSoul	7-Nov-02/8:00 PM
It was horrible. And then the pink hippo appeared. Was it as scary as the real thing is?
Re: Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin	7-Nov-02/7:59 PM
Your friends run amok too. You and your insane social circle. Let us hope the zombies hold their liquor as well as your friends. I somehow suspect they're all going to visit the liquor store. Remind them that the Scotch is mine, please.
Re: a comment on Killing spree by UAFANTHORPEY	7-Nov-02/7:57 PM
Yes.. the sly corbies are a bit close... though of course one would take those sly corbies over this anyday.
Re: Perversions by razorgrin	7-Nov-02/7:55 PM
EEEEWWWW! You're so sick! You're a horrible horrible person and I hope you get kicked off this site and I'm going to set the police on you! These aren't funny at all, these people are all perverts, how can you write about perverts, you must be really wierd. Mommy told me to stay away from people like you. They're all ick! On a slightly more serious note, the second isn't up to the framing ones.
Re: I remenber by little_angel_maria	7-Nov-02/11:51 AM
So, you realised you had to mature. Dare I ask why you decided not to?
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	7-Nov-02/9:43 AM
With your comments and poetry, you have abdicated all right to respect.
Re: a comment on Returning by INTRANSIT	6-Nov-02/6:34 PM
Actually, I find that the whole last stanza suddenly becomes this angsty affair reeking of cliches. The words in capitals are dreadful, dreadful, dreadful! Bad goth poetry can do no worse. (Actually, it can. But let's not get into that...) It's especially from the beacon image that it seems to go wrong. Actually, when I first read this, I was hoping it would turn out to be a retelling of Ulysses's return to Ithaca.
Re: Returning by INTRANSIT	6-Nov-02/6:15 PM
The last stanza still ruins it. Especially the line in capitals.
Re: Returning by INTRANSIT	6-Nov-02/3:15 PM
Did you have to ruin it with the last stanza?
Re: Cantos part mmx (The Mud Poem) by bondjedi	6-Nov-02/3:14 PM
Alas, -=Dark_Angel=- wannabe, you fail.
Re: i am genius personified by bondjedi	6-Nov-02/3:13 PM
Strangely, I actually like this. How very bizarre. And because I am evil I will vote anyone.
Re: VINTAGE by bonsaimirror	6-Nov-02/3:12 PM
The first line is magnificent. The rest puerile.