poemranker ::Confusion by ThoughtfulSoul

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Confusion

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Nov 2002 · 1 comment

I have been wondering for so long Time has begun to trickle around me No one has walked in the range of my sight for quite some time Then I begin to notice that one damn pink hippo that just wont stop trying to jump over the moon Then I awake from that creepy ass dream Only to see that the pink hippo is now serving me breakfast I now realize that light which is flashing in my direction, Seems some voice towers over me with great force It seems no one can stop the predictions of the PSYCHIC NETWORK and their damn FRIENDS

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[7] Tintagiles 7-Nov-02/8:00 PM Reply
It was horrible. And then the pink hippo appeared. Was it as scary as the real thing is?