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Confusion (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul I have been wondering for so long
Time has begun to trickle around me
No one has walked in the range of my sight
for quite some time
Then I begin to notice that one damn pink hippo
that just wont stop trying to jump over the moon
Then I awake from that creepy ass dream
Only to see that the pink hippo is now serving
me breakfast
I now realize that light which is flashing in my direction,
Seems some voice towers over me with great force
It seems no one can stop the predictions of the
PSYCHIC NETWORK and their damn FRIENDS
Up the ladder:
VINTAGE
Down the ladder:
Should I Go?
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Posted: November 7, 2002 5:54 PM PST; Last modified: November 7, 2002 5:54 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.809275 Overall Rank: 11001 Comments:
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Tintagiles @ 207.179.173.41
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7-Nov-02/8:00 PM
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It was horrible. And then the pink hippo appeared. Was it as scary as the real thing is?
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