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Should I Go? (Lyric) by RobinGayle
You encourage me to dependence, Then deny me an existence With commitment, Some reminder that we've grown. Your reluctance, it cofuses. My patience, it abuses. Still I linger, Make no choices of my own.

Up the ladder: Confusion
Down the ladder: The Trail

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.4
Weighted score: 4.809275
Overall Rank: 10961
Posted: November 9, 2002 12:18 PM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2002 8:23 PM PST
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[8] Roisin @ 80.225.2.157 | 9-Nov-02/3:33 PM | Reply
yes...you should go!He/she obviously isn't sure of what they want enough for you to trust them with your emotions. Perhaps if you show independance he/she will be more attracted to you-What am i doing? This aint no problem page!!!! Errrrr...Nice poem, good flow.
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Jun-03/9:53 PM | Reply
Birth control is an option.
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