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Should I Go? (Lyric) by RobinGayle

You encourage me to dependence, Then deny me an existence With commitment, Some reminder that we've grown. Your reluctance, it cofuses. My patience, it abuses. Still I linger, Make no choices of my own.

Roisin 9-Nov-02/3:33 PM
yes...you should go!He/she obviously isn't sure of what they want enough for you to trust them with your emotions. Perhaps if you show independance he/she will be more attracted to you-What am i doing? This aint no problem page!!!! Errrrr...Nice poem, good flow.




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