| Re: a comment on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina |
15-Sep-08/4:08 PM |
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Wow, you thought of that old one, and granted, it spares you the paragraph and the ramble. But is there no place in you heart for a fireside chat and the story handed down, the remembrance retold?
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| Re: a comment on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina |
10-Sep-08/10:57 AM |
I
think
you
are
both
batty
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| Re: BEHIND HIS BOWED HEAD by iowajerms |
6-Sep-08/6:43 AM |
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SuperDreamer has done you well. Ideas are better than poetry, so you've got the good part done
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| Re: :: a stroll by elementalidad |
6-Sep-08/6:38 AM |
prefer ice to frost
drop "the" before grass
lose the !
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| Re: :: chameleon by elementalidad |
6-Sep-08/6:36 AM |
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yep, another 575 haiku, straight laced and proper. It needs an "a" to begin Line 2.
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| Re: :: snowsounds by elementalidad |
6-Sep-08/6:34 AM |
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not bad, just that the harness of 575, like corsets, is too restricting and unnecessary even in haiku and church.
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| Re: Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer |
6-Sep-08/6:31 AM |
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The whole thing is melodramatic, not just knives and razors, a teenie kinda pimple. I expect better from street folks. Not that the execution is bad, or the titanium quill rusty, just the nonsense of the whole idea.
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| Re: Gadgets and Poems by Dovina |
6-Sep-08/6:24 AM |
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Two male votes for the carpetâs rise as opener. Intriguing, vague and suggestive, yes. But to say this scrawl is better than "Rancor" - well, please reconsider.
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| Re: SWF seeks SWM by Bethy |
4-Sep-08/10:08 AM |
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Great, been there, usually ends like this. A good description
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| Re: a comment on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina |
4-Sep-08/10:06 AM |
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Good, at least somebody is awake out there. Welcome back
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| Re: a comment on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina |
17-Aug-08/6:01 PM |
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Those Kansas remarks of last summer were like the wind pushing your backside if you're lucky. Today my bicycle leans next to the TV in coastal town of Southern California, intransit to town further south.
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| Re: a comment on Warlord by INTRANSIT |
15-Aug-08/9:00 PM |
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Writin' just as much and just as wonderin'. Never get it, always try, keep askin', seldom find why. Guess I could post here more, already got more than anybody, and more in the Q. More what? Yeah, don't go there.
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| Re: Billy Collins by INTRANSIT |
14-Aug-08/3:55 PM |
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My name is not Billy Collins
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| Re: Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp |
14-Aug-08/3:54 PM |
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Swallow it, you idiot! It's what you really want
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| Re: GOD'S MOST WONDERFUL CREATION by iowajerms |
14-Aug-08/3:52 PM |
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| Re: Warlord by INTRANSIT |
14-Aug-08/3:51 PM |
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Funny, the greener pasture and all that bovine fantasy. loved America / Loathed America - perfect.
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| Re: a comment on Running Local by INTRANSIT |
2-Aug-08/1:20 PM |
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You could at least drop a poem when you login. I dunno - the last cursing of an elderly woman slowing in front of your Mac, the cyclist you dropped two gears for so she could cross your on-ramp lane.
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| Re: A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer |
2-Aug-08/12:45 PM |
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| Re: Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet |
2-Aug-08/12:36 PM |
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No prophet, just a jerk, telling lies.
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| Re: a comment on The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
25-Jul-08/7:42 PM |
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Really, is it true? (blush)
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