replying on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina
15 Sep 2008, 4:08 PM
Wow, you thought of that old one, and granted, it spares you the paragraph and the ramble. But is there no place in you heart for a fireside chat and the story handed down, the remembrance retold?
replying on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina
10 Sep 2008, 10:57 AM
I
think
you
are
both
batty
think
you
are
both
batty
on BEHIND HIS BOWED HEAD by iowajerms
6 Sep 2008, 6:43 AM
SuperDreamer has done you well. Ideas are better than poetry, so you've got the good part done
on :: a stroll by elementalidad
6 Sep 2008, 6:38 AM
prefer ice to frost
drop "the" before grass
lose the !
drop "the" before grass
lose the !
on :: chameleon by elementalidad
6 Sep 2008, 6:36 AM
yep, another 575 haiku, straight laced and proper. It needs an "a" to begin Line 2.
on :: snowsounds by elementalidad
6 Sep 2008, 6:34 AM
not bad, just that the harness of 575, like corsets, is too restricting and unnecessary even in haiku and church.
on Suicide Note [Disposal Instructions Included] by SupremeDreamer
6 Sep 2008, 6:31 AM
The whole thing is melodramatic, not just knives and razors, a teenie kinda pimple. I expect better from street folks. Not that the execution is bad, or the titanium quill rusty, just the nonsense of the whole idea.
on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina
6 Sep 2008, 6:24 AM
Two male votes for the carpetâs rise as opener. Intriguing, vague and suggestive, yes. But to say this scrawl is better than "Rancor" - well, please reconsider.
on SWF seeks SWM by Bethy
4 Sep 2008, 10:08 AM
Great, been there, usually ends like this. A good description
replying on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina
4 Sep 2008, 10:06 AM
Good, at least somebody is awake out there. Welcome back
replying on Gadgets and Poems by Dovina
17 Aug 2008, 6:01 PM
Those Kansas remarks of last summer were like the wind pushing your backside if you're lucky. Today my bicycle leans next to the TV in coastal town of Southern California, intransit to town further south.
on Billy Collins by INTRANSIT
14 Aug 2008, 3:55 PM
My name is not Billy Collins
on Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp
14 Aug 2008, 3:54 PM
Swallow it, you idiot! It's what you really want
on GOD'S MOST WONDERFUL CREATION by iowajerms
14 Aug 2008, 3:52 PM
get real!
replying on Running Local by INTRANSIT
2 Aug 2008, 1:20 PM
You could at least drop a poem when you login. I dunno - the last cursing of an elderly woman slowing in front of your Mac, the cyclist you dropped two gears for so she could cross your on-ramp lane.
on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
2 Aug 2008, 12:45 PM
I am honored, thank you
on Smelly Scum Child. by Y2kSlamPoet
2 Aug 2008, 12:36 PM
No prophet, just a jerk, telling lies.
replying on The Man Who Drooped by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
25 Jul 2008, 7:42 PM
Really, is it true? (blush)