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:: a stroll (Haiku) by elementalidad dew drop turns to frost
crossing the park through the grass-
crisp and clear the sound!
Up the ladder:
Passion is
Down the ladder:
You
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Posted: September 4, 2008 9:59 PM PDT; Last modified: September 4, 2008 9:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9525743 Overall Rank: 8807 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 64.9.233.156
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5-Sep-08/6:06 PM
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um... no.
prefer ice to frost
drop "the" before grass lose the ! 132 view(s)
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