Re: a comment on Cutting The Ropes by darylchew	22-Oct-04/8:58 PM
If you love something, let it go. If it returns, it's yours. If not, it never was.
Re: From Then Till Now by Jeremi B. Handrinos	22-Oct-04/8:53 PM
From then til now, God has died and dreaming of sex with no hangups is his replacement. And the cow jumped over the moon.
Re: a comment on A Better God by Dovina	22-Oct-04/11:34 AM
And if it were, would you still be an atheist?
Re: a comment on A Better God by Dovina	22-Oct-04/11:33 AM
You made the same comment on my last poem, "A Lovely Cog." The one before that, “To Leave a Trace,” talks of the written records we leave after our deaths. And before that, “Archivist of Emotion.” By God, you’re right, I am a librarian. Thank you.
Re: a comment on Lufituaeb by Phaiyne	22-Oct-04/11:20 AM
Yes, I thought so,and I agree, but it sounds arrogant.
Re: a comment on GODDESS by jroday	21-Oct-04/2:51 PM
You said something similar after you deleted my comment on your poem a couple of weeks ago. I guess that's enough commenting.
Re: Fingernails by thepinkbunnyofdoom	21-Oct-04/1:39 PM
I thought you were above this sort of thing.
Re: Lufituaeb by Phaiyne	21-Oct-04/1:30 PM
Arogant
Re: Wasted Life by calilegzzz	21-Oct-04/1:26 PM
This is quite well written, though too often misspelled.
Re: Zipmark'd by fevriere	21-Oct-04/1:19 PM
It's better now, but why do you split "slippery?" And "your self allclothed" adds nothing more than "yourself all clothed."
Re: Cutting The Ropes by darylchew	21-Oct-04/1:12 PM
I see the real me in you - paraphrased, and perhaps the best definition of love. The ropes do not seem to follow from the opening as if a step is missing.
Re: Women by Bakar	21-Oct-04/12:54 PM
Ah, not true, my good sir. You find not because you seek not.
Re: a comment on BLOBBY FUN"!** by MR Blobby	20-Oct-04/1:48 PM
No, you can send it to the email listed on my Poemranker homepage.
Re: a comment on A Lovely Cog by Dovina	20-Oct-04/1:41 PM
I'll answer your question when you finally tell us what that word means.
Re: a comment on A Lovely Cog by Dovina	20-Oct-04/1:39 PM
It's not a riddle really. Have you ever tried to love a factso, instructable, working fool.
Re: a comment on To Leave a Trace by Dovina	19-Oct-04/5:35 PM
Wrong and bland such a terrible curse. I suppose, in addition, I have told and not shown.
Re: the victory by oneglove	19-Oct-04/5:19 PM
I wonder why you break rhythm in the last three lines. I weep with joy for Christ has conquered As a tree delivered Him to hades now a tree releases me from bondage Just a thought.
Re: Unseen Death by Fire_is_cool	19-Oct-04/2:18 PM
A short story with too many "then"s and commas, Not a poem.
Re: Unbalancing Act by MacFrantic	19-Oct-04/12:46 PM
"often crazy in the head" about sums it up.
Re: BLOBBY FUN"!** by MR Blobby	19-Oct-04/12:43 PM
Nursery rhyme madness. Why? They are mad enough as is.