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Wasted Life (Free verse) by calilegzzz
As you die take a breath and remeber
All the tears you thought you'd never see,
All the leafs you walked on
All the blinding lights that blinded you to this
All the pointed fingers you laughed with
Sedated dreams you imagined
Collisions with the stars when you kissed
The people you never touched in life
They were born to lose
Books read to regulate apologetic phrases
Hopes of being a fake perfect painting
The girl you killed
The glass people you shattered with your
words
The worries you hid away in the darkest
corner
The forgotten peace
All those who promnised not to try
All those you lied to and looked straight
in the eye
The teeth you broke
The ones who lost the game to you and fell
The criess of love you laughed at and how
they died
You should have held on
Now you die and no one cries
life goes on
Shameful beauty wasted in your life of hate
Nobody cares they live on
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5136
Posted: October 20, 2004 8:39 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2004 8:39 PM PDT
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