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Wasted Life (Free verse) by calilegzzz
As you die take a breath and remeber All the tears you thought you'd never see, All the leafs you walked on All the blinding lights that blinded you to this All the pointed fingers you laughed with Sedated dreams you imagined Collisions with the stars when you kissed The people you never touched in life They were born to lose Books read to regulate apologetic phrases Hopes of being a fake perfect painting The girl you killed The glass people you shattered with your words The worries you hid away in the darkest corner The forgotten peace All those who promnised not to try All those you lied to and looked straight in the eye The teeth you broke The ones who lost the game to you and fell The criess of love you laughed at and how they died You should have held on Now you die and no one cries life goes on Shameful beauty wasted in your life of hate Nobody cares they live on

Up the ladder: Love from,
Down the ladder: Brogues are best

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5116
Posted: October 20, 2004 8:39 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2004 8:39 PM PDT
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[9] Dovina @ 24.52.156.155 | 21-Oct-04/1:26 PM | Reply
This is quite well written, though too often misspelled.
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