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Unbalancing Act (Free verse) by MacFrantic
He walk down elm street singing sunday maybe monday
Parading things he never wanted
For his friends
He got german dog with divine right he want to fight
An irish sock puppet on his hand
When will it end?
He stay inside most of the time in states sublime
Not anxious, happy, often crazy in the head
Thinks it's all pretend
He waver in the changing wind stopping to begin
Levetating kiddies from the floor
A curse he cannot mend
He stand above the crowd screaming awful sins aloud
The flashing lights impair his vision
Only muddling his decision
About how not to save the day
And who would save it anyway?
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8578
Posted: October 19, 2004 11:46 AM PDT; Last modified: October 27, 2004 11:44 AM PDT
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