Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	7-Oct-05/2:01 AM
By my definition of faith, you are not expressing faith. You are saying that by your logic and emotions you think . . . Faith is the substance of things not necessarily supported by emotion or logic, simply because somebody says so.
Re: a comment on Sex Object by Dovina	7-Oct-05/1:56 AM
Don't you guys vote anymore on your sex objects?
Re: For my unborn by Caducus	6-Oct-05/4:37 PM
I give birth almost every morning during the half-sleep after dream and before reason. Maybe this is not what you mean, doesn't matter.
Re: My First Boyfriend by jessicazee	6-Oct-05/4:30 PM
From "your waterbed sucked me in" on it's good.
Re: Enigmatic Innocence by Katzclear	6-Oct-05/4:28 PM
stoicism is so similar to apathy that the opening lines seem trivial. Vile existance and survival are not similar, making the next few lines wonderment. "Steadfast mistaken for diffidence" is a good line. The last line seems to change the subject.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	5-Oct-05/4:33 PM
It all depends on faith. We can take the word of anyone, and if that word is taken without apprehension from inputs received through our five senses and from logic, then it's an act of faith.
Re: a comment on Why I’m Homeless by Dovina	5-Oct-05/3:51 PM
Yeah, I think dashes would be better.
Re: The chestnut by richa	4-Oct-05/4:18 PM
If she drives an Englishman to France, she has more power than you admit.
Re: a comment on A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina	4-Oct-05/4:13 PM
Does it have a plot? I must have missed it.
Re: a comment on A Barefoot Day in the Park by Dovina	4-Oct-05/4:12 PM
Thnaks, B.
Re: a comment on Sunrise On The Slag Heap by Caducus	3-Oct-05/10:07 AM
All those Islamic events are such male-posturing insensitive guff. If they had any female soul, (and they do, but squelsh it in street fighting) there would be some sense of love and consideration in their celebrating.
Re: No Aegis by wilco	3-Oct-05/4:40 AM
Hey, it starts off well and then tries to make the metaphoric turn, and bogs into some Tennessee swamp. Still, I see the process and believe it will work with a little more clarity.
Re: a comment on Without my Glasses by Niphredil	3-Oct-05/4:35 AM
He always tells us that. Just grin and go on.
Re: a comment on Sunrise On The Slag Heap by Caducus	3-Oct-05/4:32 AM
I don't plan on celebrating Ramadan. Godawful poetry - yes.
Re: a comment on A Meadow, Among Other Things by Enkidu	3-Oct-05/4:29 AM
Thank you.
Re: The Play by Hadasl	2-Oct-05/5:13 PM
Spelling (reenact amends) and grammar (too many to mention) checks would help. mainly, I think a clear idea of what you want to say would be the biggest help.
Re: What do u think i am! by T. Jonathron Remp	2-Oct-05/12:05 PM
The best part is "a deceitful pathway to empty noise." Zodiac is attracted to you in a spelling or spell-binding way.
Re: Without my Glasses by Niphredil	2-Oct-05/12:01 PM
Don't mind Zodiac, he's heat stricken over there in the Islamic sun. His grammar's gone kaput, and he thinks glasses will relieve his pain. As for your poem, I'm having trouble with how glasses affect streaks of white that you see, and haw you could see it any better with glasses, looking through the windowshade.
Re: a comment on The Last Suburb by unknown	2-Oct-05/11:50 AM
Dear Deleted User, You are clearly affected by your situation and our reaction here. Please take it less seriously, more as rebuttal to our own clobberings.
Re: a comment on Of the Lady on the Bridge by Verse2Verse	2-Oct-05/11:46 AM
Yes, that's what I'm saying. But of course you insist on non-metaphorical "reality." Start chomping!