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Sex Object (Free verse) by Dovina It saddens her now
how she used to complain.
Sheâd shake that girl if she could
and tell her she had it all.
She took for granted
what now sheâd love
and knows the only thing worse
than being just a sex object
is not being one.
She says itâs like complaining
when youâre rich.
Sure they pursue your money
but, oh to have such problems.
Up the ladder:
All Alone In A Selfish Moment
Down the ladder:
Fall of all
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Posted: October 5, 2005 4:26 PM PDT; Last modified: October 5, 2005 4:26 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9284782 Overall Rank: 9361 Comments:
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ALChemy @ 69.134.78.74
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6-Oct-05/7:01 PM
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Don't worry Dovina we still think your a sex object.
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Dovina @ 24.172.198.142
> ALChemy
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7-Oct-05/1:56 AM
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Don't you guys vote anymore on your sex objects?
You're sick. If you were a feminist, you'd at least get so-called sensitive men. No vote.
I'm neither maleist nor feminist. Is a 5 a no-vote? Just say yes.
Because of course you'd hate to be, oh, what would you say? - "pinned down by a title." Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah. I mean, I'm not some "tree-hugger" or "nigger-lover" or something, but thinking like yours is as dangerous as the kind who actively hate women. That's me being 100% sincere. Therefore, I refuse to afford you the dignity of a zero. 5 is the least-respecting vote.
You have titled me as both sexist and denyist. I should call you a titlist, but such exchanves are futile.
Titling is the work of writers. If you don't believe so, you'll either write poems like you do or write poems like everyone else and think you're doing something different. I wouldn't wish either on my worst enemy.
I title that confusionism, written by double-talkist. I write poems like I do - of course. I don't write like everyone else; and sometimes I do something different. So there's nothing to wish on me in this regard.
This poem has an overtone of a persecuted jew about it.
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