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Tipspit (Free verse) by kingit
Years of fear & terror sticken gravy-thicken tear in errant beer that sickens sticks in ears of barren Baron horror festers, severs bold endeavor leaven yeast of bock a bevy... trickling,ticking talking walking to my own ear drums all thumbs in sum, succumb to beer & terror fear.

Up the ladder: mothers
Down the ladder: The Lincoln Half

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9362
Posted: October 29, 2003 5:54 PM PST; Last modified: October 29, 2003 5:54 PM PST
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Comments:
[5] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.221 | 29-Oct-03/5:56 PM | Reply
Have you ever drunk beer? I did once, but I had a really bad experience.
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.60.238 | 29-Oct-03/5:59 PM | Reply
Drinked it, dranked it, DRUNK.
[5] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 163.1.234.221 > kingit | 29-Oct-03/6:03 PM | Reply
You must be one wild child!!!1
[6] Shardik @ 24.126.116.54 | 29-Oct-03/7:49 PM | Reply
A brave new swirled
[5] Wobble McFly @ 195.157.153.253 | 30-Oct-03/1:22 AM | Reply
This poem sounds really good when you persuade a slightly deaf disabled old man, port-sodden like so many of his ancient tribe, to recite it directly into your ear canal using a method of recitation known as "shouting".
[n/a] kingit @ 67.68.48.37 | 30-Oct-03/2:42 PM | Reply
THAT'S what rockinroll is all about!
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.63.24 | 2-Nov-03/1:35 PM | Reply
dip me in dogshit
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