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Tipspit (Free verse) by kingit

Years of fear & terror sticken gravy-thicken tear in errant beer that sickens sticks in ears of barren Baron horror festers, severs bold endeavor leaven yeast of bock a bevy... trickling,ticking talking walking to my own ear drums all thumbs in sum, succumb to beer & terror fear.

Wobble McFly 30-Oct-03/1:22 AM
This poem sounds really good when you persuade a slightly deaf disabled old man, port-sodden like so many of his ancient tribe, to recite it directly into your ear canal using a method of recitation known as "shouting".




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