replying on My Angel by jroday
13 Feb 2005, 2:05 AM
This was my first time trying to write The King James English.
on Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina
11 Feb 2005, 1:52 PM
Dovina the poem is very nice, the title explains what the poem is all about if you read it carefully.
on Wedding Poem by al-naafiysh
9 Feb 2005, 12:24 PM
Now that's reality!
on Separation by Dovina
7 Feb 2005, 2:59 PM
"Ye can not drink the cup of the Lord, and the cup of devils: ye can not be partakers of the Lord's table, and of the devils."
A doubleminded man is unstable."
I love the beginning of verse two--Revelations
A doubleminded man is unstable."
I love the beginning of verse two--Revelations
replying on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer
1 Feb 2005, 2:15 PM
A hypocrite with his mouth destroyeth his neighbor.
A fool uttereth all his mind.
A fool's voice is known by multitude of words.
Seest thou a man that is hasty in his words.
There is more hope of a fool than him.
THE WORDS OF GOD
A fool uttereth all his mind.
A fool's voice is known by multitude of words.
Seest thou a man that is hasty in his words.
There is more hope of a fool than him.
THE WORDS OF GOD
replying on Psalm of Wonder by Dovina
1 Feb 2005, 5:39 AM
There is no peace, saith the Lord, unto the wicked.
They shall seek peace, and there shall be none.
All his days are sorrows, and his travail grief.
I am full of confusion. Isa. 48 22
Ezek.7 25
Eccl. 2 23
Job 10 15
I bless you with a -10-
They shall seek peace, and there shall be none.
All his days are sorrows, and his travail grief.
I am full of confusion. Isa. 48 22
Ezek.7 25
Eccl. 2 23
Job 10 15
I bless you with a -10-
on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer
30 Jan 2005, 5:23 AM
This is good, coming from a man who's brain tissues are deteriorating due to Complex Partial Seizures.
When I had my second brain surery. I felt like some of the verses in this poem, that's why I wrote the poem can't fight no more -10-
When I had my second brain surery. I felt like some of the verses in this poem, that's why I wrote the poem can't fight no more -10-
replying on In Answer To Your Question by Dovina
29 Jan 2005, 7:38 AM
You are right! As far as this poem goes. But it can be done if you are marrying for all the right reasons, and sometimes that's not enough. Believe me It's not easy, because once you get married seem like the devil put all kind of temptation around you. And being a man it's very hard, but I thank the Lord I never messed around on my wife. The family that prays together stays together. I can only speak for myself.
replying on B.L.C. LONG GONE by jroday
26 Jan 2005, 1:29 PM
You're right I meant to say full of wonder
replying on Feudal Conflict by Dovina
26 Jan 2005, 2:10 AM
Feisty indeed is she.checkmate! 10
replying on To You, My Son by Bhaskaryya
24 Jan 2005, 7:25 AM
I am sure you will be a very good father when that times comes.
replying on To You, My Son by Bhaskaryya
24 Jan 2005, 6:42 AM
You are being cynical in so many words, but my thing is you are talking to a little child, who dont know what you're talking about.
The reason I say that is because,(Enjoy the innocence of these early years) you expect him to remember what you said when he grows up to be a real man? -7-
The reason I say that is because,(Enjoy the innocence of these early years) you expect him to remember what you said when he grows up to be a real man? -7-
on Tough Act To Follow by jroday
8 Jan 2005, 5:03 AM
Did'nt know my son was log-in already, the second blacksoul comment is mine.
on Poetic Profit by Dovina
4 Jan 2005, 2:36 PM
-10-
replying on Point Blank by jroday
3 Jan 2005, 5:31 PM
That's why you are my internet inspiration, you keep it real.
UNTIL THEN.
UNTIL THEN.
replying on Point Blank by jroday
3 Jan 2005, 12:22 AM
Thank you richa for your advice, the next time I'll try to do better.
on Point Blank by jroday
2 Jan 2005, 4:58 AM
This is my first time trying to write a "Prose Poem"