Re: a comment on My Angel by jroday	13-Feb-05/2:05 AM
This was my first time trying to write The King James English.
Re: Prayer of Forgiveness by Dovina	11-Feb-05/1:52 PM
Dovina the poem is very nice, the title explains what the poem is all about if you read it carefully.
Re: a comment on Goodbye by Dovina	11-Feb-05/8:16 AM
Dovina the poem is very nice, and as for as al-naafiysh you know who she is. I wrote the poem Can't Fight No More.
Re: Wedding Poem by al-naafiysh	9-Feb-05/12:24 PM
Now that's reality!
Re: Separation by Dovina	7-Feb-05/2:59 PM
"Ye can not drink the cup of the Lord, and the cup of devils: ye can not be partakers of the Lord's table, and of the devils." A doubleminded man is unstable." I love the beginning of verse two--Revelations
Re: a comment on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer	1-Feb-05/2:15 PM
A hypocrite with his mouth destroyeth his neighbor. A fool uttereth all his mind. A fool's voice is known by multitude of words. Seest thou a man that is hasty in his words. There is more hope of a fool than him. THE WORDS OF GOD
Re: a comment on Psalm of Wonder by Dovina	1-Feb-05/5:39 AM
There is no peace, saith the Lord, unto the wicked. They shall seek peace, and there shall be none. All his days are sorrows, and his travail grief. I am full of confusion. Isa. 48 22 Ezek.7 25 Eccl. 2 23 Job 10 15 I bless you with a -10-
Re: Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer	30-Jan-05/5:23 AM
This is good, coming from a man who's brain tissues are deteriorating due to Complex Partial Seizures. When I had my second brain surery. I felt like some of the verses in this poem, that's why I wrote the poem can't fight no more -10-
Re: a comment on In Answer To Your Question by Dovina	29-Jan-05/7:38 AM
You are right! As far as this poem goes. But it can be done if you are marrying for all the right reasons, and sometimes that's not enough. Believe me It's not easy, because once you get married seem like the devil put all kind of temptation around you. And being a man it's very hard, but I thank the Lord I never messed around on my wife. The family that prays together stays together. I can only speak for myself.
Re: a comment on B.L.C. LONG GONE by jroday	26-Jan-05/1:29 PM
You're right I meant to say full of wonder
Re: a comment on Feudal Conflict by Dovina	26-Jan-05/2:10 AM
Feisty indeed is she.checkmate! 10
Re: a comment on To You, My Son by Bhaskaryya	24-Jan-05/7:25 AM
I am sure you will be a very good father when that times comes.
Re: a comment on To You, My Son by Bhaskaryya	24-Jan-05/6:42 AM
You are being cynical in so many words, but my thing is you are talking to a little child, who dont know what you're talking about. The reason I say that is because,(Enjoy the innocence of these early years) you expect him to remember what you said when he grows up to be a real man? -7-
Re: Tough Act To Follow by jroday	8-Jan-05/5:03 AM
Did'nt know my son was log-in already, the second blacksoul comment is mine.
Re: a comment on The Way by Dovina	8-Jan-05/3:00 AM
You know I have felt like that many many times in my life. Which way should I go.
Re: Poetic Profit by Dovina	4-Jan-05/2:36 PM
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Re: a comment on Point Blank by jroday	3-Jan-05/5:31 PM
That's why you are my internet inspiration, you keep it real. UNTIL THEN.
Re: a comment on Mosul by Dovina	3-Jan-05/12:31 AM
It's better than a 5-7-5
Re: a comment on Point Blank by jroday	3-Jan-05/12:22 AM
Thank you richa for your advice, the next time I'll try to do better.
Re: Point Blank by jroday	2-Jan-05/4:58 AM
This is my first time trying to write a "Prose Poem"